My scholarship essay

[polishthunder5]

Over the past few years in school I have focused on what I want to do in life. I think I have it narrowed it down to pursuing a career as a electrical engineer. After deciding my career goal I have taken many strides to get myself prepared and still had fun with my activities. I believe my efforts will pay off

Comments

[jadedreverie]

good essay :-) check the first 2 paragraphs, though, for grammatical errors ie an 'a' where it should be 'an' and 'I' in place of 'of' or 'in'

goodness...i'm starting my career already, lol

[polishthunder5]

thanks for the tip, i already made the changes on paper.

[jadedreverie]

just making sure!