What They Said

[politelypuzzled]

heres a story that harrypotterfanfiction.com rejected because they said that it paraphrased the song i used too much, well right now i fucking hate that site for its bullshit  but whatever im posting it here insted, i hope you guys like it so just leave me a review or comment or whatever and let me know what you think

Ron had just come to a

Comments

[woodwind]

I hate harrypotterfanfiction.com too. I had a sixteen chapter fanfic with 200 reviews and they just deleted because it didn't fit the rules. It was horrible. But this isn't about me.

I really enjoyed your fanfic. I thought the words really ached with meaning and truth. I can really relike to Ron in this. I loved this line-

Without her he would shatter, no reason to live if your world went dark he thought to himself.

I think it's really neat too that you like Harry Potter and Narnia.

[politelypuzzled]

thats terrible! i swear their just a bunch os cocky assholes...but what can you do they have some good stories on there.

oh i dont just like narnia and HP i adore them. im really glad you liked this fic! it means so much to me, i also have other work on fanfiction.net if you wanna check my other stuff out sometime. hospitalhorror is my penname.

i would love it if you could read some of my stuff

[woodwind]

That'd be neat. I'll do that and yes they are a bunch of cocky assholes, love that expression now. I left that site but I still write Harry Potter fanfiction.

[politelypuzzled]

ooohhhh!

where can i read some of it?