Bright Lights - Prologue

[polychrome_love]

Title - Bright Lights
Rating - PG for now.
Chapter - Prologue/? Multichapter
Genre - Romance, Drama, AU, School Life,
Warnings - Fanboying, dancing, dreaming. Not beta'd
Bands - The GazettE, Dir En Grey, Alice Nine, OC's and more..
Pairings - Reita/?, more to be revealed.
Summary - What does it take to reach the bright and shining stars? The answer

Comments

[kyoselflove]

I'm really excited about this xD I'm a sucker for Reita, and oooooh Toshiya. Plus school fics are my guilty pleasure. Love your writing, thanks for sharing and I look forward to more!

<3

[polychrome_love]

Ah thank you my first comment! :D Yes Toshiya and his smokey eyed makeup! ahaha. Love your fics too though I use a separate journal to comment ^^; This is somewhat a school fic since they're all teens, but right now in the the story it's still the summer haha^^ I hope I won't disappoint! :)

[kyoselflove]

Mmm I love me some Totchi lol. Aww thanks! I'm glad ^^

Yeah I love the Jrock boys as teens haha, I like how they are going to dance too, very unique and interesting. I'm sure you won't disappoint xD

[ravennightmare6]

Hello there, sweetie~ ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ

[polychrome_love]

Wahhh Thank you so much! I didn't think that people would actually notice my fic. Hehe. I read it over, and you we're right about the confusing conversation. I caught it too, the lack in details, I'll work on that. About the length, the chapters will definitely get longer after this one, but I'm scared that I might add some unnecessary words and sentences that it might make it seem uninteresting and laggy so I worry about that too.
I'm very happy that you found this prologue intriguing, and yes I'm also trying to follow your idea of being mysterious for a while. Haha. I just hope my writing will only improve, and not to disappoint people who look forward to this story ._.
The love interest... I guess we'll just have to wait a little longer. ahaha.
Thank you so much for the compliments and suggestions! I'm especially happy that it came from someone that writes awesome fics I also love! I'm your reader under a separate journal^^ Please feel give me more suggestions and advice in the future. I appreciate them very much :)

[ravennightmare6]

You're very welcome, deary <3 I'm really glad I was able to be of some use, I'm always happy to share tips about writing (even though my own definitely isn't perfect >.<). Never fear, chapter length just comes with time. Either way, it's quality over quantity, really. So don't worry about length too much ^__^ When it comes to description kind of stuff I find that the best way to beef out chapters is to explore the way a character is feeling in a certain moment. Express their thoughts and emotions. I find that this gives chapters a good amount of detail without straying from the focus :0

Never fear, sweetie. Writing always improves over time so there's absolutely no need to worry about disappointing anyone ^__^

Ah, I'm glad you read my fics. Haha :3 I didn't expect you to know who I was >.< But I'm glad I was able to offer some advice and hopefully help you out with yout writing. I can't wait to read more from you ^__^ <3

[charlio4444]

Wow, this is a really good start!
I don't review as much as I should, but I really had to for this :)
Looking forward to more!

[polychrome_love]

I'm happy you really like it! I'll work hard so this can be a good story. Thank you!^^