Decision And Division

Aug 06, 2010 18:54

Decision And Division

Title: Decision And Division
Author: PonyATF
Pairing: JonghyunxKey
Genre: Angst (drabble)
Rating: Pg-15
Disclaimer: I neither own the boys, nor do I make any money with this story.
Summary: A glance at a break- up.
A/N: ... I can't believe I broke them up...

Decision And Division )

pairing: jongkey, media: fanfiction

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ahmins3 August 6 2010, 17:40:07 UTC
ahmins3 August 6 2010, 18:56:53 UTC
ponyatf August 7 2010, 11:57:27 UTC
... hehehe, me? A sadist? Noooooooo way! *cleans her lash*

I'm sorry, dongsaengie... It was really weird for me as well, but I needed to come back out of the insanity that is writing four cracks at a time... And it helped me very much.
Kekekeke, but I don't think, u will read a break- up from me any time soon again! I felt like a sinner: NOT COOL AT ALL!

~ Lovez u, thanks for ur understanding- and- not- me- killing- comment ♥♥♥

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kiseki04 August 6 2010, 18:49:55 UTC
:(( I don't wanna be like this..
omo~ Jjong why you leave Key!!
NO~~~
*sobs*

Bb, don't make this angst again.. :(
this is short but I like it ^

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ponyatf August 7 2010, 12:00:13 UTC
Guh, u felt as bad as me, when I was writing it, hmh?

I am so sorry, OTP SHALL BE TOGETHER FOREVER!!! ♥

*huggz sadness away*

Believe me, I won't be able to write something like this any time soon, kekeke... I want them to be together as well!

~ Thank u bb, for still reading, even though, they break- up here, and of course, thank u for ur comment as well!♥♥

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kiseki04 August 7 2010, 17:08:46 UTC
promised me!!
:)

but it's up to you to make whatever fic, just I don't like angst one :(

yes JongKey will stick together forever :D

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adynka August 6 2010, 20:10:19 UTC
gonna spank you! for real... >_< why so angsty?
i do love such fics, but not with breaking up my ♥ couple.. hun~~ why did you this to meee?
aish, still love you... ♥

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ponyatf August 7 2010, 12:07:11 UTC
Kekeke, no problem for me with the spanking... (No, pony, no! This is not the time for innuendos!)

I wanted to write just about an angsty moment, that brings me down from all the crack, but isn't so long, that I have to create a plot line... So, it would have been kinda hard, to let them come back together in the shortness of a drabble... (TT___TT)
BUT for me, the last two sentences could be interpreted as Key still not being over Jjongie, so, there might be a hope for them?!

*Lovez u back and givez u pony kissez for comfort*

~ Thank u bb, for giving me a nice comment instead of the deserved scold! ♥♥♥

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fluffyxcloud August 6 2010, 20:25:03 UTC
muffin, this was the most beautiful piece of your writing I've ever read! I really loved the imagery and word choices you used~ it was simply excellent!

(is it bad I don't mind you breaking up your OTP because I like to whore out all SHINee with each other? kekekeke)

But really, the gunman metaphor was just....*shudders* so good, bb! But I hope it wasn't something sad that made you write something sad. I love you~ and I hope to see cracky, happy poni soon ^.^

but really, you rocks my socks off ^.^ ILU

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ponyatf August 7 2010, 12:18:23 UTC
♥♥♥♥♥♥muffin♥♥♥♥♥♥

Omo, WHAT A COMPlIMENT! But I blame Mister Hugo von Hofmannsthal for screwing up my brain... Or was it Trakl? Whoever, I think, creditz or scoldingz should go in that direction, kekeke.
Can u believe, that I needed around five minutes for each sentence?

AHAHAHAHAH, sweety, aren't I already spazzing with u ALL OVER SHINEE, UP AND DOWN AND UP AGAIN?!?!

I often feel like a gunman in situations like this... guh, I am a proud little pony... And it sucks to be the one, who has been shoot, kekeke.
OF COURSE I AM SAD WITH MY LOVE SO UNREACHABLE AND FAR AWAY!!! ... Kekeke, but still, I think, u can't get the crack out of me, even when I try to be a little angsty...

Lovez u back so so so much... I'll put ur sockz back on next time, kay? Don't want my honey to catch the sniffles, kekeke

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ponyatf August 7 2010, 12:24:53 UTC
Guuuuuuuuuuhhhhh ... *huggz huggz huggz*

AWAY WITH THAT SADNESS AND THAT CRAMPS! Oh boy, srsly, I thought, I will be chased with torches and sticks, so it makes me happy, that u still liked it, even though OTP is... is... is in a little complicated situation here...

Lovezzzzzzzzzz u back, bb, please make sure to get better soon, kay? (^3^)

... And thank u for being so nice to the blasphemic pony that I am... *sob sob*

♥♥♥♥♥♥

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ponyatf August 8 2010, 12:03:12 UTC
... I have no interest in kinky stuff at all! *pushes u to the bed*

So stop trying to seduce me all the time!! *gets the handcuffs and the ice cream*

I will keep my innocence, just for the record! *flips through our diary for to remember, which pose we haven't tried yet*

But I guess, if I have deserved the spanking... *jumps u*

... never trust a pony's words...

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