A Tooth For A Tooth

Aug 29, 2010 20:36

A Tooth For A Tooth

Title: A Tooth For A Tooth
Author: PonyATF
Pairing: JonghyunxKey
Genre: Crackish fluff (one-shot)
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I neither own the boys, nor do I make any money with this story.
Summary: A chase through the dorm.
A/N: For my lovely gurkl-chen, who is my partner in crime, my team-mate in waiting and as writer's blocked as I am, ( Read more... )

pairing: jongkey, shinee, media: fanfiction

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fluffyxcloud August 29 2010, 22:45:18 UTC
ahahahaha, baby jjong, it's just the dentist! kekeke, as my sister often says "suck it up!" ^.^ SUCH A CUTE FIC!! and key makes my life in this one, too! bwahahaha, the never-ending struggle for good dental hygene! heehee

yeobo, I'm glad you got sleep, I didn't go on the internet yesterday I was shopping for concert clothes (no luck I have no idea what to wear) and today I am with my nephy-poo! BUT SOON--soon, mah love.

great story! I LOVE MAH WIFEY!!!! *tons of kissez and loooooove* great ficcy fic! (i'm reading an...interesting novel right now and there are scenes that will be adapted into a jongkey smut for you bwahahaha)

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ponyatf August 30 2010, 02:55:13 UTC
What a wise sister-in-law I have! How is she doing btw?

Kekekeke, yeah, it was urgently needed to sleep. And tonight I am all up again and u are not there... So tomorrow, when u come to play, I will be very sleepy or already asleep... What a bad timing we have (TT__TT)

Hmh... Shinee and Suju on stage... U sure, u even want to wear a thing? *ignorez the potential other people aroung u, because heck, it is nearly 5 am and that means no not-smutty thoughts are possible rn*

GIMME THAT JONGKEY- SMUT!!! I AM IN NEED OF READING SOMETHING FROM U!!! (Although, I really really really want to read the continuation of the tofuho... I am shocked to say, it is the one thing I want to read the most *gasp*... But srsly, it is like our affiance-fic and I loved so dearly...)

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE U BACK!

o--------------------------( ^_____^ )-----------------------------o

"Thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis much and more!!!"

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thinkingfood August 30 2010, 00:45:48 UTC
Such a cute ending!!
Jongkey paly dangerously!! Key slamming into the fridge, Jong being ripped away from the door, Key falling over chairs. Are they superheros because im pretty sure I could never survive.

aja aja HWAITING!! I start school next week so im going to need all the love I can get and pony love is my fav.
<333

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ponyatf August 30 2010, 03:07:56 UTC
Hehehehe, this is pretty much, how I played with my brothers. But yeah, I am pretty sure, u get some kind of super-powers, when u REALLY not wanna do something (like that one time, my brother wanted me to drink some orange juice and I was sure, he put some chilly in it: I ran faster than a cheetah) or when u REALLY want someone to do something (like my brother, when he was a faster cheetah than me and made me drink that freakin' chilly-orange-juice... YAK!)

Omo, what kind of school?
Anyways, 'HWAITING!!!' for the both of us to succeed and muchas muchas pony-amoras for u my dear. Srsly, like a whole van full of love!!!!

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thinkingfood September 1 2010, 03:04:57 UTC
Chilly orange juice... say what now?!?! And your brother made you drink it even after the cheetah run. not cool, not cool at all! xD

Starting regular high school... wait can you describe any high school as being regular??

*Swimming in your love* woah thats a little creepy HAHA
<333

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ponyatf September 1 2010, 03:38:57 UTC
Agreed! But heck, that is, how it goes down when u live with two older brothers... (TT__TT)
Oh well, but I wasn't better at all and had my own mean tricks to pay back, kekeke.
Srsly, sibling-fights are the most creative and fun fights there are. (^0^)

Hehehehe, I dunno... We have a weird system here, when u leave the elementary school, u can choose between three kind of high schools and... guh, srsly, I dunno, kekekeke
(But I know what u mean and the answer is: sometimes.)

No no, not creepy at all... *calls secretively for security*

Kekekeke

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kpop_otaku13 August 30 2010, 01:18:26 UTC
that was just absolutely adorable! I loved it! I'll admit even though it said rated G, when they ended up in the bathroom I thought it was going to get smutty ;] oh well. but yes I LOVED this. somehow I can picture this, or something very similar, actually happening at the dorm :)

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ponyatf August 30 2010, 03:11:13 UTC
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, either smutty or bloddy, hmh? Guh, Jongkey is teasing so much, I dun even know, how I managed to NOT continue it smutty, kekeke

The casting of forcing!key and eloping!jjongie is pretty much how I imagine them to be irl, kekeke

~ Thanks for reading and commenting!! <3333

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kpop_otaku13 August 31 2010, 21:37:25 UTC
I picture them much the same way. especially since Key is the Umma and Jonghyun seems very much the the bratty disobedient child XD you are so welcome and please keep up the great fics :3

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ponyatf August 31 2010, 21:43:49 UTC
Kekekeke, right right... It is always the mom, who forces one to do things u won't, when u are a kid (especially, when u are a brat like Jjongie, kekekeke)

~I'll try my best!~ <3

By the way... U're icon is alluring me. *sigh* ... Sometimes the leader makes me... dunno... He has a very strong charm!

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mad_nux August 30 2010, 12:29:17 UTC
this is so cute X3

*is literally rolling on her bed right now*

kyaaaaaaaa~

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ponyatf August 30 2010, 13:58:04 UTC
HUUUUUUUUUIIIIIII!!!!
We play being seals now? *joins u rolling on the bed*

Kekekeke, gladz, the first disciple liked!

*givez u some strawberry-juice and some choco-chip cookies, the sacred alms of the Jongkey-consecration*

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ponyatf August 31 2010, 16:45:34 UTC
Kekekekekekeekeke, yeah, it could have been the beginning of a smut... With Key dominating... (o__O)

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!!!

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