The Lady-stache

Sep 28, 2010 21:13

The Lady-stache

Title: The Lady-stache
Author: PonyATF
Pairing: JonghyunxKey, ninja!Ontae
Genre: A rainy-angsty romance, au
Rating: R (cursing, use of alcohol, implied sex)
Disclaimer: I neither own the boys, nor do I make any money with this story.
Summary: Kibum is a photographer in his late twenties. By accident he sees his ex again, the one man, he ( Read more... )

pairing: ontae, pairing: jongkey, shinee, media: fanfiction

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kaybee38 September 28 2010, 23:25:55 UTC
OMG this is brilliant! I just KNEW the man in the bed was Minho! I love how we can see into Key's consciousness, how he looks at the world as if his eyes are actually the lens of the camera.

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ponyatf September 29 2010, 00:13:52 UTC
Kekekeke, was or wasn't ?
Cause the greedy kissing scene is between Jjongie and Key and it is Jonghyun lying in Key's bed (^-^)

"... how he looks at the world as if his eyes are actually the lens of the camera."
Ah, I love that phrasing! Thanks for saying that!

~ And thanks for reading and commenting!

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kaybee38 September 29 2010, 00:24:27 UTC
Always! You write some great stuff!

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ponyatf September 29 2010, 01:22:32 UTC
Awe, thanks again! <33333333

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crossing_by September 28 2010, 23:50:38 UTC
Love and heart it ...
I love the work of kibum's mind to explain and feel about the life, the love, jjong
I love the insight of minho for kibum life (never failed to supraise me ... As exppected for my dear ace)
I love the love that jinki and taemin show on kibum

This fics is <333

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ponyatf September 29 2010, 00:33:56 UTC
Hehehe and I love, what u pointed out!

I was greatly inspired by my best friend for writing this Minho, kekeke. And since he is the observer of the group, he was perfect for being the knowing and understanding friend, kekeke.

~ Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear!

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ahmins3 September 29 2010, 00:42:57 UTC
ponyatf September 29 2010, 01:24:22 UTC
*decorates ur spot with some Dongtae pics (WOW, did I just created a new pairing?!)*

Enjoy, dongsaengie!

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ahmins3 September 29 2010, 16:50:49 UTC
ponyatf September 30 2010, 17:08:58 UTC
OMO!!!! I WOULD LOVE TO CREATE A RUMOR FOR U!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ( ... )

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mad_nux September 29 2010, 01:08:15 UTC
this is my spot. thank you xD

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ponyatf September 29 2010, 01:30:47 UTC
Hehehehe, make urself comfy, my sweet disciple-shipper-cutey!

And have a Jongkey-cracker, while were at it, kekeke

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mad_nux September 29 2010, 03:21:50 UTC
*blushes at her title* XDDD

mmmm the jongkey cracker is tasty.. 8D

oh my this is so angsty and serious but I can't help but LMAO at Jong with a woman with a stache o.0 LOLLLL what a weird kink.. XDDD I'm gonna have to grow my facial hair longer then roflol xDDD

poor Kibummie though.. Jong is such a douche.. why the fuck does he have to leave Kibum in the first place. stupid idiotic dinosaur kekekeeeeeeee

i love the descriptions. snap and all.
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ponyatf September 29 2010, 03:40:40 UTC
Kekeke, I am glad u found the crack between all this dramatic (^0^)
Yes yes, a disciple should be bearded anyways!

I think, sometimes Jjongie is a bit slow, kekekeke... He just needs some years to realize, that the girl has a stache and that Key is a fox, u shouldn't miss out on! Kekekekekee

Love u. Snap. Kekekeke

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hitsujiga September 29 2010, 01:19:02 UTC
i love this. especially the kibmum pics in his mind...<3

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hitsujiga September 29 2010, 01:19:42 UTC
see i cant even write keys name right =..=

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ponyatf September 29 2010, 01:46:44 UTC
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, du kannst dir nicht vorstellen, wie sehr ich KIBMUM liebe!!! Es hört sich an wie der Anführer der Divas, oder der Fashionistas, kekeke
*hat Spaß daraus eine wilde Geschichte zu formen*

Wie auch immer, danke dir für's Lesen und Kommentieren! <3333333

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hitsujiga September 29 2010, 03:21:11 UTC
SPEAK ABOUT KIBMUM XD Da kommt die umma wieder durch. Ich dachte aber eher an ne puffmutti TT. *sobs* Das hab ich nun von zu vielen slut!key ff's.

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