One song, Glory..

[pookie_blue]

I found this poem that I wrote about eleven years ago. Hadn't intended on writing it, but lightning struck and the poem wrote itself. I tried to continue writing for about a month before I decided that since this one wrote itself that any others would do so as well- what I tried to write sucked

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[believe2000]

Very nice. I would love to see some musical accompaniment to understand the pacing better, don't be so harsh on yourself.

[pookie_blue]

I'm musically illiterate, so I don't have any sounds with this one. Well, it was drizzling and August when I showed this to him, so crickets in the drizzle... It was quiet enough to hear the mist settling. And my harsh was directed at the poems I didn't bother keeping really, & because it's stupid to assume that my recognizing his sorrow caused it. :)