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[pookin]

Chest is clenched, hard to breath, my body flicks likes a switch

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[my_introspect]

And when I see you
Times will be better
They haven't been as good
Since the moment you went away
It's easy to say
That time will make things better
The days are getting shorter
And for you I'm here to stay

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[pookin]

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[my_introspect]

Your welcome =)

[dragoncowboy]

jeffrey lyle,
out on the sea again.
the fish splash, the birds hover,
where will you make your penance?

[my_introspect]

come to mee Jeffrey
we will make penance together
and wade in the ocean
and wash our troubles away
the sea will be our lover

[dragoncowboy]

the ocean spins over us
our feet find only ground
can't wash, cant be forgiven
spinning more, we get dizzier
and realize everywhere is boats

[my_introspect]

Feel the cold seas
Surrounding our sides
Feel it engulfing
Our truth and our lies
Forever and never
The sound of its cleaver
The sound of redemption
It falls on your heart

[kethseltho]

You, sir, have gone against logic to create what I christen Prosetry. It's like Prose got knocked up by some rapist Poetry. Making something that simply confuses me. Good job.

[pookin]

heh =)

Random emotions balled into one thing, sounds like rapist poetry.

balled

[hardcorebrownie]

excellent metaphor