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Jan 25, 2007 22:23

He licked his finger and raised it in the air as the wind blew violently in the air. He didn’t need his figure to figure out the wind was blowing right at him as it slammed into his face almost making his eyes tear; it was just one of those things he wanted to do. There were many things he wanted to do and many more that he wanted to become, but ( Read more... )

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vahn_ryu January 26 2007, 03:29:00 UTC
It sucks man, he was wearing a parachute.

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pookin January 26 2007, 03:32:29 UTC
it was sort of symbolic and if he didn't and what kind of motivational writing would that be... GO KILL YOURSLEFS!

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dragoncowboy January 26 2007, 03:36:52 UTC
i agree with marcelino, the parachute was a throwback to his old life, a kinda safety net. sure, he jumped off the cliff but before he can go all the way through to "shed his skin", if you will, he's already going back to what's comfortable.

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pookin January 26 2007, 03:42:37 UTC
lol, i was actually gonna have the guy die by slamming into the cliff or something but that isn't very motivational so I went with the shoot which still represented his old self but it was behind him as something he could look back on and something if he wanted to go back to, because one can't totaly get rid of their old self no matter how hard you try.

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