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Into the Night (FINAL CHAPTER)

Sep 12, 2011 02:21

Into the Night
Author : Pooobaihr
Beta: shullieq
Chapters: 10B (FINAL) / 10 + Epilogue
Pairings : Uruha/Kai (onesided), Kai/OFC, Ruki/Reita , Aoi/Uruha/Kai
Band: the GazettE,
Guests: Dir en grey, Aki (SID) , Tora (Alice Nine)
Genre : AU, Vampires, Horror?, Action (if you squint), smut, slight romance(well..if you squint), Drama
Rating : NC-17
Warnings : The game ( Read more... )

vampires, fanfic

Comments 17

sanochi September 13 2011, 18:41:00 UTC

Wow I just read that in one sitting! and the its just gruesomely awesome! As expected Ruki will always won, kinda upset you didn't include Akira's death. I wanted to see how Ruki-sama was going to torture dearly Reirei to death *cackles* I'm a sadist I know :D but I understand that would spoil the suspense of the ending so I won't complain.

This was a great read, everything you put in this story to Yutaka and Akira's death was so vivid it gave me goosebumps and it got me hooked to the end. I was inedible that they were going to die in the end, come on now who can win against blood sucking vampires? *runs off to read your other fics*

pooobaihr September 13 2011, 22:53:06 UTC

In one sitting? You mean you read the whole fic or just this one chapter? LOL There were moments that I wanted to give Ruki a few flaws.. But then I remembered how I had written this story. I gave plenty of background about the 3 to where the reader should know that by now, Ruki has perfected his skill. In his eyes, there is no room for mistakes. So ultimately in the end.. Yes... He will always win.

Hehe.. Yeah it would spoil it if I had written anymore. I think I had written these two to be EXTREMELY likeable and many of the readers connected with them and if I had actually shown how Ruki tortures Reita, it would kinda spoil it. Though I REALLLY thought about writing it in. lol I decided not to.

Thank you for reading this and commenting!

pooobaihr September 13 2011, 22:54:17 UTC

PS: lol many of my other fics are unbetaed and therefore are kinda.. horrible reads? lol... But I hope you enjoy them anyway.. despite that.

sanochi September 13 2011, 23:11:32 UTC

Yep I read the whole fic in one sitting and I'm very impressed it was like watching a horror movie unfold, couldn't stop reading LOL :)

sztikerami September 13 2011, 20:07:16 UTC

This fic made me speechless for long hours. And now I'm trying to put a proper comment together, but I just keep staring at the screen. So I only say this: I loved it. It gave me the chills and the ending was great, an ugly end for both Yutaka and Akira, which makes the whole story hmm... realistic instead of sappy, if you get what I mean. It's really well-written and... wow, just wow!

pooobaihr September 13 2011, 22:47:26 UTC

Im glad you read this and enjoyed it. I totally understand what you mean by it not coming off as sappy. =D That's what I was going for. I wanted to bring something that was more... "real". Given the relationship between the three vampires, its only common sense to believe they wouldnt add to their group. There were plenty of hints of that throughout the story. Again, Im happy you read this. Thank you for commenting :D

in_bloom81 September 14 2011, 19:20:49 UTC

aaaaah! *screams louder than akira*
you better update ! update soon :0 !!!!!

I don't know what to say :/ That part where akira is losing yutaka right in front of his eyes is so sad and intense...

(.___.) ! this trio must be the deadliest group of vampires in jrock fiction (though i admit this is the first vampire-fic i read :D ) ..well.. Aoi isn't creepy.. uru is kinda creepy (seems dis balanced and immature, this creepy to me) and ruki is deadly..but he's pretty cool~ ya know he's practical and all and protecting his family pretty well. Aoi is just.. erm..tagging along and babysitting uruha.

But gosh akira and yutaka are paying a huge price.... what for? what crime did they commit?
just like ruki.. he paid a price for no fault of his and has been turned to what he is now. Since life was terribly unfair to him, can't really blame Ruki for having no sense of 'morality'..

like how you ended this chappie :) Will wait for the epilogue ~

pooobaihr September 14 2011, 22:28:39 UTC

Yeah.. its really sad. *sadface ( ... )

in_bloom81 September 15 2011, 04:04:53 UTC

ah i won't be able to use the internet tonight cause I'll be at a friend's place..a shitty place she pays a huge rent for. It's ok though, I'll can read when return home tomorrow~ I'm glad you're about to successfully wrap up the story~ It's a pity when interesting fics stay unfinished.