The Kiss

Jul 07, 2009 05:39

Title: The Kiss
Author: Pooobaihr
Pairing: Reita/Ruki , mentioned Aoi/Uruha, Aoi/OFC
Genre: AU, Fluff, Crack
Rating:  PG
Disclaimer: I wish...
Warning: Teenagers/pre teens kissing, cussing, watergun fight...
Summary: Reita, Uruha and Ruki's life change after crashing Rei's big sister's birthday party.
Comments:  Yeah, you guys... the ending my seem rushed ( Read more... )

ruki, reita/ruki, reita

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jalela July 7 2009, 11:36:31 UTC
It was really really nice. I loved this kiss part at the end. It was intense. Nice work!!

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pooobaihr July 7 2009, 15:59:29 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting.. I wasnt sure if I did this one ok.. so Im glad someone else likes it other than me! :)

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hyacinthdreams July 7 2009, 12:59:45 UTC
asddffgkl this is so cute ;~; I love how insecure and teenage-y they are :D definitely looking forward to the sequel!

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pooobaihr July 7 2009, 16:00:38 UTC
lol.. hahahha.. Yeah, I had to think back a few years to when I was in school to get the attitudes and things right xDDDD... I had a guy friend who had almost the same experience.. lol.. so I just tweaked it a little and used that .. hahahha Thanks for reading!

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laurasljn July 7 2009, 13:13:33 UTC
this is so cute and sweet and...i love it...it's perfect (even if pour uru is hurting - bad aoi )
offers ice cream and chocolate chip cookies <3

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pooobaihr July 7 2009, 16:01:21 UTC
Yeah I know its sad.. Poor Uru.. xD

Thanks for the cookies and icecream~!!!! *omnomnom*

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shizukasou July 7 2009, 13:57:10 UTC
D'awww, this was so cute. ;_;
Will be waiting for the sequel! (And hopefully there'll be some more Aoi/Uruha? -puppy eyes-) ♥

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pooobaihr July 7 2009, 16:02:00 UTC
hehehe.. There might be some Aoi/Uruha xDDDD .. heheheh..

Im so glad you liked it~!

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amande_sama July 7 2009, 14:19:43 UTC
That was adorable!!!! I even managed to burn the cake in the oven because I couldn't tear my eyes from teh screen XD

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pooobaihr July 7 2009, 16:03:09 UTC
hahahah.. well, Im glad you liked it.. but Im sad for the cake~!

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