The Kiss

[pooobaihr]

Title: The Kiss
Author: Pooobaihr
Pairing: Reita/Ruki , mentioned Aoi/Uruha, Aoi/OFC
Genre: AU, Fluff, Crack
Rating:  PG
Disclaimer: I wish...
Warning: Teenagers/pre teens kissing, cussing, watergun fight...
Summary: Reita, Uruha and Ruki's life change after crashing Rei's big sister's birthday party.
Comments:  Yeah, you guys... the ending my seem rushed

Comments

[froggy_skyttles]

awh! that was cute and awkward :3 not in a bad way, just in a way that reminds me of those years in my life *sigh*

but poor Uru D:

[pooobaihr]

hahahhaha... Yes.. those years can be traumatizing...

Yes.. poor poor Uruha.. T.T

[ritsumatsu]

I usually don't read AU, especially not the "when we were kids" stuff, but for some reason I decided to click on this one this morning and damned if I wasn't late for work because you had me so transfixed! Very good job with the awkward, nervous teenager thing. Kind of underplayed the anxiety involved with the questioning of one's sexuality, but it still works nicely.
Waiting for a sequel...

[pooobaihr]

Yeah... I dont write too many band fics... as far as I can remember, I only have like 3 of those.. lol... I dont know why.. but.. I like to try and invision them doing something else other than what we know and love them for... ya know? :) Im glad you decided to read it... lol.. Im trying to get better with my writing.... >.> this one was a tough one... around the end I kindof gave up on it lol..... but Im glad people still liked it. As far as the situation between them goes... I actually stole this from a real life situation. (not the same occasion.. but the same outcome) I had a friend who wasnt sure about his sexuality and he kissed his bestfriend... So this is kind of why it seems a little downplayed... lol.. I stole it from them xD *still remembers the day i was told about it.. lol.. it was hilarious.. over 9 years ago* THANKS AGAIN FOR READING~!~!~! :)

[aya_rockz]

Awwww~~ this is sooo cuuuutee~~
*yay for sequel* :3

[pooobaihr]

haha.. yay im glad you liked this

[luna_no_koibito]

Oh gush!
I don't remember the last time I felt so hot from just a simple kiss.
and the emotions, gush ...*shivers in pleasure* first kisses are amazing! and you did an awesome job describing everything.

I SIMPLY LOVED IT! *still squealing*

[pooobaihr]

yeah I know.. one simple kiss can do wonders~!

Im glad you do *kisses and hugs*

[sephlorraine]

That was the cutest thing I've read in a loooong time. (I hesitate to read fanfiction with "fluff" warnings, because that usually implies pet-names are involved and the idea of anyone in Gazette calling anyone else "muffin" or "sweety" makes me gag.) THIS, however, is the perfect example of what fluff should be, imho. I loved every line of it.

Your characterisations of each of them is so cute and indiviual, too, and I love how realistic teenage Reita is with a super-soaker and his sister's friend's bra. xD

I'll be stalking you for a sequal.

[pooobaihr]

Yeah I dont like when people add the guys saying muffin or sweetie... now.. I have written Uruha like that once... >.> only because I can see him being the only one using it.. lol.. and he was like a SUPER uke in that fic.. HAHAH... xD ... but for the most part.. I DONT LIKE FLUFF AT ALL... Thats why Reita shot his sister.. lol.. and said she was dripping in sap.. its actually what I was thinking when I wrote it.. lol...

Im glad you liked my characters.. Teenage Reita is like my brother and guys I knew back when I was in junior high.. so I threw alot of them into his character...

Stalk away if you like.. I dont mind~! :)