Spoiled Patience

Nov 29, 2009 03:16

Title: Spoiled Patience
Author: Pooobaihr
Pairing: Kai / Ruki
Chapters: Oneshot
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Smut, crack
Warning: blow job, man/man sex, hand job, teasing, licks from Koron <.<, bratty Ruki, somewhat super dom Kai.
Synopsis: All work and no play makes Ruki a bratty boy.
Comments: GAH.. Finally.. Im sorry sweetheart. This fic is for Read more... )

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eiga_risti November 29 2009, 12:25:07 UTC
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is the one I've been dying to read and yes, bb, you meet my expectation!!! Bratty Ruki needs some spanking from Leader Kai!!!!

And as always, your smut makes me happy!!!!

But I doubt about the dream, though~ Me and dreams do not share a good relation....

Thank you so much<3

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pooobaihr November 29 2009, 17:15:01 UTC
You are very welcome sweetheart.. Im very happy you like it. I worked hard on it and I made myself stare at the computer screen all day yesterday so that I could finish this for you~ .. heheh.. Im pround I did good.. YAY

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reituki_insane November 29 2009, 13:36:53 UTC
bloody hell, that was wicked. ^.^ (^-^)/

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pooobaihr November 29 2009, 17:15:20 UTC
Very much so.. heheh.. Thanks for reading

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pooobaihr November 29 2009, 23:04:26 UTC
I so see him like this too.. lol

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kawasakininja November 29 2009, 22:48:01 UTC
LOL, Ruki seems to have no match in being both horny and spoiled! I love how he was all over Kai trying to get what he wants. I hope poor Koron wasn't paying too much attention : /

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pooobaihr November 29 2009, 23:07:20 UTC
You know.. I had a different version of this.. Right where Kai was trying to think of something else while Ruki did what he was doing Something else was supposed to happen and this was supposed to go a different direction.. BUT . My other computer went on the fritz .. so.. I had to find my friends that I had sent copies to... none of them had that one.. soo.. i had to think of something else.. heheh.. Thanks for reading...

>.> o.. i said alll of that to say.. there was more Koron appearences.. lol. but since I cant remember what it all was.. ((wrote it back in July)) .. we got this~

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luna_no_koibito November 29 2009, 23:58:29 UTC
GUGUGAGA...uh? ...NO ABLO ESPANOL? ..uh? ...my brain is literally mush right now, like I can't process. Fuck I am so lost I am at borders This was awesome I loved it! gaaah I really like Kai/Ruki but the way you write it though ... You really do them very well, very very well! This was awesome.

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pooobaihr November 30 2009, 02:42:03 UTC
Thanks sweetheart

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