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pooobaihr

The Stolen Sunlight

Jan 19, 2010 13:18

Title: The Stolen Sunlight
Author: Pooobaihr
Chapters: 2/3?
Pairings: Byou / Aoi
Bands: ScreW / GazettE
Genre: AU, thriller
Ratings: R - NC-17
WARNINGS: pedophilia, personality disorder, kidnapping, molestation, abuse, ??? [mystery ending]
Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN EITHER BAND HOWEVER SAD THAT MAY BE. The things written in this fic has never ( Read more... )

aoi, fanfic

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pooobaihr January 31 2010, 16:22:20 UTC

*gives tissue*

12thgrave January 19 2010, 20:03:25 UTC

BEAT HIS ASS YUU! KICK HIM WHERE THE SUN DON'T SHINE!!!
*roots on Yuu*

pooobaihr January 31 2010, 16:22:35 UTC

EXACTLY

maunetjeret January 19 2010, 20:19:44 UTC

It was intense. I like it though. It was very raw and real.

pooobaihr January 31 2010, 16:22:48 UTC

thanks..

ladyrevania January 19 2010, 20:20:30 UTC

Everything would be easier if this kid didn't protest. That's so difficult, it didn't surprise me Byou had to use force. I totally understand him, even if I don't approve pedophilia. You wrote it in the way which almost forced me to like him and hate Aoi for being such a brat who doesn't want to do what Byou wants.

pooobaihr January 31 2010, 16:23:30 UTC

You know.. you would think that huh? That everything would be easier if he werent struggling... but.. *shrugs* *sigh* thanks for readin :)

ladyrevania January 31 2010, 18:47:59 UTC

I wouldn't think such things if it was a real situation, of course.

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pooobaihr January 31 2010, 16:23:46 UTC

I knowwwwww