Forgive Us Our Transgressions 10/16

[poor_medea]

Comments

[fairygrrl45]

Ugh....It's OVER! I NEED MORE! MOOOOOAAAAAAAAAR! Okay, I'm done being bitchy now. More please? This is lovely, and angsty, and prefect, and startlingly in character now that Erik is back in his right mind and I LOVE IT.

[poor_medea]

Thank you, I'm so glad you like it!

Next chapter will be up on Saturday.

[alernun]

Chapter ten, in which Erik has SO MANY FEELINGS. Very well done though. You managed to make his complex reveries seem natural and not like, infomercials, which is how alot of these types of chapters come off. I also really like the line "He could not be weighed down by the loss of one man's legs." Oh but you cannnn Erik. You cann and you areeee.

Poor everyone. God I shudder to think what's going on at the mansion right now...

[poor_medea]

Oh, thank you. That's really nice to hear. I can't help but write loooong paragraphs of introspection, and I know not everyone likes those. I'm glad you don't mind them here!

[ladywilde80]

Oh Erik! You stubborn bastard..

You and this fic are going to kill my will to live. Oh the angst, I can't deal.... please let this turn out okay, please...

[poor_medea]

Aw! Don't worry--this is still a 'fix it' fic.

[singingduck2]

Pretty hard time for Erik! But if all this can make think just a little, worth it!

And I can relate to what he's feeling about Charles, the doubt and all that, but he should know better. For all his lies by omission, Charles wouldn't alter his mind. But I guess it's easier to think about that than realising his old ways are not so good in the end.

Great chapter! Please more?

[poor_medea]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

More on Saturday.

[telperion_15]

Erik's conflictedness comes across really well here - here's hoping he works out what it really means!

[poor_medea]

Thank you!