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poor_medea

Forgive Us Our Transgressions 5/?

Nov 05, 2011 08:58

( Forgive Us Our Transgressions: Chapter Five )

forgive us our transgressions, charles/erik, fiction: x-men

Comments 11

talitha78 November 5 2011, 13:28:28 UTC

Great chapter!!

poor_medea November 7 2011, 18:30:14 UTC

Thanks!

caterina_m November 5 2011, 15:58:17 UTC

This is lovely, I love happy Erik like this but I'm also worried what will happen if he starts to remember the past. I really would like he won't.

poor_medea November 7 2011, 18:30:45 UTC

It is certainly a risk.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

singingduck2 November 5 2011, 22:02:41 UTC

This Erik is very kind and open, it's quite refreshing. But at the same time I miss some aspects of the old Erik (just like Charles I guess).

Great chapter!

poor_medea November 7 2011, 18:30:56 UTC

Thanks!

lilacsigil November 6 2011, 01:51:20 UTC

The way Charles misses the old Erik even while enjoying the company of this one is very deftly done. I very much liked Hank's reaction, too, and Erik's brief, troubled look.

poor_medea November 7 2011, 18:31:20 UTC

Thank you, that's so kind of you to say!

telperion_15 November 6 2011, 12:14:54 UTC

Lovely chapter! :)

poor_medea November 7 2011, 18:31:35 UTC

Thanks!