Flesh and Blood, slashy fic

[disanddat]

Flesh and blood
by Carla Jane

Written for poorboyshuffle, the prompt was Johnny Cash's "Flesh and Blood". The fic is inspired by that, but it's not a perfect match for the song

Comments

[fleshflutter]

That was really lovely. Very evocative. :)

[disanddat]

Thank you very much for commenting. *is delighted*

[candygramme]

That was very pretty - almost a painting. Beautifully done.

[disanddat]

Not too purple then, way cool. Thanks hon.

[candygramme]

I didn't think it was purple at all. I think there's a slight kink of mine uncovered here. I got a little quiver going when Sam was painted all over in "In A Gadda Da Vida" and now Dean and John. Pardon me while I have a little quiet time!

[phantomas]

I love how oblivious John is, and how vulnerably raw Dean's lust is...and the imagery, omg, the luscious gardens, almost primeval, just like they are, body-painted and half naked. Beautiful use of settings and metaphors.

This:
the figure of John, mostly naked and decorated like a primitive warrior-king, framed by their only real home, a sleek black car.

Kills me.

:D

[disanddat]

Thanks for the opinion on the POV. It helped a lot. Of course I've fiddled with it since then.

The song kinda demanded that nature play in an important role... although I admit, the name of the song grabbed me into choosing it.

Mmmm, painted Winchesters. Yum.