the play: version one

[poorplayer]

Lights Up on a simple bar. A young woman stands behind it. She whispers to the drinker sitting in front of her.. Two men sit further down the bar, hands clasped. A song plays faintly in the background. An older man enters. He sits down at the bar and she approaches him

Comments

[toxicshima]

i like the way it's going. sorry i only just read it right now, i didn't have the patience when you first posted it, and then it disappeared of my friends page. but finally! i enjoyed it. it's really progressed nicely.

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[poorplayer]

oh wow. Thank you. Yay. You rock.