dear all of you who've wronged me

Oct 16, 2011 23:49

dear all of you who've wronged me
R
short one-shot: 624 words
how low, how low, how low will you pushed me?
an & warning: violence, mentions of rape, vulgar words. this is inspired by "I spit in your grave" and a bit of "the girl with the dragon tattoo". those two were on my mind while writing this. so... yeah ._. enjoy? orz don't be so surprised. ( Read more... )

pairing: junhyung/hyunseung, group: beast, rating: r

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faded_citylites October 17 2011, 06:44:16 UTC
have to say, was definitely surprised that the one who'd been violated in the past wasn't hyunseung, but junhyung.
nevertheless, it was a pleasant change and the way you portrayed them in this situation is very interesting.

i should be working on something right now, but i definitely don't regret reading this ♥

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popcorn_heart October 17 2011, 19:36:19 UTC
Thank you for reading~ ^^<3 It was really weird writing Junhyung like this, but in my mind he's the victim and I just... vulnerable Junhyung is... I like him like that OTL

Thank you, thank you~

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singoutloud25 October 17 2011, 06:47:12 UTC
I liked this a lot. I really liked that it was Hyunseung as the protector and savior because it's so rare that we see him written that way. I'd like to see more of this story-line...to see who exactly Hyunseung is and to get to know their characters more, obviously you don't have to it was just merely a readers intrigued suggestion (did that make any sense at all?)

Anyway, I loved it and I love your writing and thank you for writing this!!!

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popcorn_heart October 17 2011, 19:40:49 UTC
Ahh, I really like Hyunseung being all brave and mysterious. And too much Hyunseung rape is not good for me, so I made him the protector. I don't know if I can explain them more if I write a second installment 'cause this was so random and my mind is weird. lol

I'm happy that you liked it! Thank you for reading~

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hirooa October 17 2011, 10:47:19 UTC
*melt*
it`s really something fresh when you portrayed Hyunseung like this
me likey so much
^^

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popcorn_heart October 17 2011, 19:41:30 UTC
It's refreshing for me too~ ^^

Thank you~:D

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mankadi October 17 2011, 14:07:45 UTC
its different.. but in a good way
since hyunseung usually the weak one !! :)

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popcorn_heart October 17 2011, 19:42:22 UTC
Yay! :D OTL Weak Hyunseung is cute but him like this is nice too ^^

Thank you for reading~ :D

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