Gaijin no Haiku

[popeinnocent]

My little brother tells me that haiku is 5-7-5, not 7-5-7. So I've actually been writing the ignorant Westerner version of Japanese poetry. How embarrasing.

I feel bad for brideofsatan23. I can tell she's in a lot of pain, and I wish there was some magic I could cast to make her feel better

Comments

[dantree]

The TRADITIONAL way is 5 7 5 but as long as there is 17 sylables total you are fine

[brideofsatan23]

I think I will survive....... For the most part, it isn't bothering me too much anymore unless I have been standing alot or if I bump it........

Hopefully today will be much better.... I feel quite optimistic about how this day will go, since we should have a full staff and I should not have to worry too much about crap:) Besides, the glass IS half full...... of cyanide.....

ROTFLMAO!