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May 19, 2010 00:03

He’s used to this. The sounds, the screams. The gunshots vertabrating through the air and disappearing in a cloud of smoke. The fear in the eyes of scattering crowds, the pain, the shouts and cries. He’s heard it all. He knows it by heart.

Calm and collected as always, gun in hand and fingers twisted to the shape of a fist, as he strolls ( Read more... )

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poplockdropit May 20 2010, 01:30:09 UTC
lol, GTOP ISNT ALL ABOUT SEX !!! =D

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orayeah June 11 2010, 00:16:47 UTC
I AGREE SO MUCH WITH THAT D:
You have no idea. I don't usually like Smut-only fics cause I like plot and story and dialog and just a fricken story in general.

LIKED THIS ONE THOUGH~! Short but it sucked me in.

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jacinthe86 May 18 2010, 16:47:39 UTC
Awesome fic....been needing a dark fic :) reading this and listening to Tell Me Goodbye is love lol

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atenais_pala May 19 2010, 02:03:56 UTC
reading this and listening to Tell Me Goodbye is love
Absolutely the same here.

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animegoil May 18 2010, 17:14:56 UTC
Niiiiice. I liked that you went ahead and had him killed in the end ^_^ Wasn't sad though. Lol.

Omg, I burst out laughing when you said 'at least he isn't some whiny bitch, crying and breaking mirrors' XD And i thought of the Haru Haru video and had a good laugh at the irony.

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atenais_pala May 19 2010, 02:10:19 UTC
Dark-smut GTOP fics are the best.
Love how you describe the little things, the details, the unrevealed thoughts.

And he drives off into the night; Jiyong’s blood on his hands and tears in his eyes.
I can see this in my mind, its so poetic...

*sighs* fuck, why do I keep doing this to myself
Please, keep doing this to us.

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whiteangel7928 May 19 2010, 05:15:03 UTC
;_; it's sad and dark....but that was fucking awesome! It's nice to not have the happily ever after for once!
And damn you're good! You actually made me feel something!
Please keep writing XP

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