Time (Bob/Ray)

Dec 31, 2009 16:36

Title: Time
Recipient: templemarker
Author: jain
Pairing: Bob/Ray
Rating: G
Summary: The closet suited Bob.

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mourning_night December 31 2009, 22:47:00 UTC
I love how matter of fact Ray sounds and how Bob just doesn't process for a second because it's Ray talking about coming out. I really like how Ray accepts that Bob might not join him out of closet.

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shinodarely January 1 2010, 03:44:42 UTC
I feel you got the characters down so right. I love Bobs thoughts and how awesome and calm Ray is. Great story!

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turlough January 1 2010, 21:24:49 UTC
This was so sweet and it felt so RIGHT. Your Bob is wonderful and your Ray is so cool!

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fictionalfaerie January 2 2010, 15:56:23 UTC
Awwh~
I loved this.
Really liked your Bob voice!

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wanderlost January 3 2010, 01:38:49 UTC
This was delightful. The characterization felt spot on, and I loved Ray's no-nonsense approach to asking Bob out :P

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