This was so beautiful, and heartbreaking, and hopeful. You made very creative adaptations to the traditional storyline and you had a wonderful grasp of Pete, almost polarizing those positive and negative things about him into those two realities before reconciling them at the end. I love the open-ended ending, the happy moment in front of the TV - there is way more hope and excitement in that than a mutual declaration of love or steamy sex scene could have provided. Thanks for such a wonderful, wonderful read!
Hope is a thing with feathers and it's the only think that kept me in flight when writing this so its where I had to end it. I'm just so glad that you thought I navigated the premise. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it enough to leave such a thoughtful review. Thank you so much.
This is really gorgeous. I love the way the world where Pete and Mikey stayed together is built up, and also how energetic and aggressive that Pete still is, despite being in a more balanced mental state overall. And I also love that both Petes go after getting Bronx back with just as much urgency as trying to get Mikey back. A fabulous read!
Wow it took me an age and a half to get back to you and for that I'm sorry. But I wanted you to know that I got your review and I really appreciate the thought and consideration you clearly put into it. I'm really glad you thought I did okay with Bronx (kids are tricky) and that you enjoyed the story. Thanks so much! ♥
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