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poppetawoppet

Refreshing

Jan 20, 2016 21:52

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cannibal story, poppet has issues okay?, poppet writes fic sometimes, ljidol

Comments 31

adoptedwriter January 23 2016, 06:54:08 UTC

I was captivated! AW

poppetawoppet January 26 2016, 03:06:19 UTC

Thank you

murielle January 24 2016, 07:58:17 UTC

Oh this is good!

It unfolds beautifully and builds to (for me) an unexpected ending.

Well done!

poppetawoppet January 26 2016, 03:06:08 UTC

Thank you!

leni_ba January 24 2016, 18:05:53 UTC

*shivers*

Oh, this was good. Love the repetition, worked well for this short piece.

...and I am such a trustworthy child, so good, so lovely.

Actually, you can get away with a lot when you're the good kid. Adults just would rather go into denial than accept they were wrong.

poppetawoppet January 26 2016, 03:05:52 UTC

As the good kid, I always love to twist our reputation :D

Thanks!

leni_ba January 26 2016, 03:07:53 UTC

We do have more fun behind the scenes, and if something goes wrong, chances are that someone else will take the fall..

It's a sweet life!

fodschwazzle January 24 2016, 23:42:00 UTC

This guy is quite creepy. I would be surprised if he could hide himself well much longer, considering the change in life situation coming his way. Can one make punch out of a couple of people and then just not do anything bad ever again? Seems a slippery slope.

poppetawoppet January 26 2016, 03:05:07 UTC

Well, they are very smart (I honestly haven't decided he or she yet,) so I think they'll get away with it for awhile yet....

Thanks for reading

roina_arwen January 25 2016, 00:07:01 UTC

This definitely gives a new meaning to ovary punch. Egg-cellent.

poppetawoppet January 26 2016, 03:03:56 UTC

I'm eggs-tremely happy you liked it