Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 21, Epilogue Part 1

[poppyhoney_67]

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Rating: NC-17 for the whole story
Dedication: To Keren. Thanks for everything. 
Feedback: Oh yes please!! I appreciate every word.
Authors Note:  This chapter is unbeta'ed so any mistakes are ALL mine.  I

Comments

[camillar]

Oh, this was a wonderful surprise! I really really hope Ennis says yes, but what about KE? I don't know how thrilled he'd be about Jack moving in, and would they keep hiding the fact that their together from him? Ah, so many questions!! Eagerly awaiting part 2! Hope you have a wonderful time this weekend!
Camilla

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Camilla! I owe you a comment or two on your last couple of ITL chapters....:/ will get to that as soon as possible. Glad you liked the chapter, and I know it throws up lots of questions. I hope part 2 will answer them for you. I had a great time in Amsterdam :) Back to the writing now though. Thanks for reading.

[denim_girl2006]

ahhhhh, the poem was very sweet and romantic. ♥
As always, you write in a way that is very soothing to me, and I feel the love the boys have for one another. I liked the little parts of cannon you included too. And I'm delighted that Jack has a plan of action for their future. I could just imagine Ennis' face at the end when Jack said about him living there. I'll look forward to Part 2. Hope you have a nice week-end.

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi denim girl. Thanks for your comment, glad you liked the chapter and the poem....I'm so glad you like my writing, that means a lot. I'm so close to the end now but I still want to write well and so I'm glad you like it. Part 2 will be here soon, I promise. I just wish I could invent another 24 hours in my days...:/

[plumduff]

So beautifully written. I don't think anyone knows these boys better than you do. I'm not brilliant at commenting but have been reading since the beginning and I think you've done an awesome job. You've given us the extra romance that we wanted, delved into the recesses of their minds and given us their thoughts and feelings, and conveyed their closeness and devotion to one another. Bravo, I look forward to the second part.

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi plumduff, thanks for your lovely comment, and please dont worry about not commenting all the time, thats totally fine with me. Just nice to know you are enjoying it, and that you think I've done what I set out to do which was to give Ennis and Jack a chance at love that was deprived of them in the OS and film. Plus I'm a complete romantic fool. Part 2 will be here soon, I promise :)

[ramona4jake]

I know Ennis will be in shock, but I hope he wont overreact and hurt Jack with what he might say !! 9 months apart must've melt him down a little...
Thank you, this was great but I want the 2nd part !! ;o)

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Ramona, thanks for your comment. I know its hard to wait for the next part, but hopefully it wont be too long before its here :/ Thanks for reading.

[bentgyro]

That was lovely and hot! Jack has made a statement and now Ennis has to respond. I hope that he has the right answer - Can't wait for part 2!
Thank you!
HT

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi HT, thanks for your comment...lovely and hot is exactly what I wanted it to be! Jack's been thinking of this for a while, he's been going out of his mind for way too long he had to do something. All will be revealed in Part 2 :) Thanks for reading.