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Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 5

Oct 25, 2007 22:49

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Summary: Ennis and Jack are working as counselors on a children's camp for the summer. Their meeting on the first evening on the camp leads to a friendship neither had expected, nor looked for.
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poppyhoney_67 October 29 2007, 20:15:13 UTC

Hi PJ,thanks for your comment. Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for reading.

mariez65 October 25 2007, 23:10:48 UTC

Hi Christie - I can't believe I've been missing out on this wonderful story. Mel recommended it over at BM and I just read the first four chapters last night. It's clear you have experience with camps because everything is described so realistically and you've drawn some great OCs - I especially like Meli - she is one smart cookie. :) You've developed J&E's awareness really well and this first sweet encounter was beautifully written. Can't wait for more. Thanks!

Marie

poppyhoney_67 October 29 2007, 20:16:37 UTC

Hi Marie, thank you so much for your kind words, I'm so glad you liked the catch up of chapters. I do have some experience of camps, but a lot of it is rusty so am having to dig deep into my memory!! Glad you like Meli, she's great to write! Thanks for reading.

samtyr October 26 2007, 00:09:39 UTC

Oh this is really interesting now. I only hope that they will be able to keep things fairly quiet though Meli seem to be cool but Cindy sounds like trouble. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

poppyhoney_67 October 29 2007, 20:18:23 UTC

Hello samtyr, thanks for your comment. Things are going to get interesting now, for sure. Don't worry about Cindy, Meli will sort her out. Thanks for reading.

phoebe2680 October 26 2007, 00:09:56 UTC

I'm not sure if I have commented or not before, but I'm LOVING THIS!!! And it just keeps getting better and better!

LOVED the ending! *dies*

Thank you!! xoxo

poppyhoney_67 October 29 2007, 20:19:19 UTC

Hi Phoebe, dont worry about not commenting before, its just nice to see you here now! Glad you are enjoying it and you liked the ending, I wanted it to be just right. Thanks so much for reading.

tui77 October 26 2007, 00:11:58 UTC

What an enjoyable story. The sex scene was way hot, tender and erotic. Well done and thank you!

poppyhoney_67 October 29 2007, 20:19:58 UTC

Hello tui77, thanks for your comment. I am very happy you loved the sex scene and hot, tender and erotic and just wonderful words to hear!! Thanks for reading.