Waiting For You

Jan 30, 2008 20:49

Title: Waiting For You

Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.

Author's Note: This is from the Middle of Nowhere universe, set around the time we're at in the story. I wrote it in response to the tragic event of Tuesday 22nd January. I don't know if it will make ( Read more... )

poppyhoney_67, au!au, waiting for you, bbm, middle of nowhere

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big_heart_june January 30 2008, 22:02:37 UTC
How utterly lovely dearest Christine ♥ Thanks so so much for being able to write this and share it with all of us *hugs* ♥

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poppyhoney_67 January 31 2008, 11:51:29 UTC
Hi June, thank you so so much for your comment. I am so glad you liked it. It helped me. Hugs back to you. xx Love your icon. x

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Waiting for You.... ennis4me January 30 2008, 22:22:51 UTC
This was so beautiful.

I, like your other readers, see Heath when I see Ennis...and I found great comfort in the fact that Jack is with Ennis for all time....

I'm glad you found solace in writing it. We are all the more better for it.

Thanks.....Adrianne

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Re: Waiting for You.... poppyhoney_67 January 31 2008, 11:52:13 UTC
Hi Adrianne, thank you for your lovely comment. I'm glad you felt better for it. It made me feel better too. I like to know that Ennis and Jack will be together for ever too. xx

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rightwhere_u_r January 30 2008, 22:38:44 UTC
Thank you, thank you, thank you, sweet Christie...

Tears are clouding my vision, as this was so sad, but also so beautiful. It's going to take a long time before we start to feel a little bit like our old selves, but I think Heath's death might have changed something in us all, because what each of us takes away from this sadness is an aspect of Heath that inspired us. That way he doesn't only live on in Matilda, but also in all of us, the men and women who have admired him for his talent, for his choices, for who he was.

*hugs* to you... Love, Mel

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poppyhoney_67 January 31 2008, 11:53:56 UTC
hi Mel, oh sweetie, sorry to have made you cry. Didn't mean to but tears are part of life and we want to remember Heath's life. You are right, he lives on in all of us. I will never forget him and how he changed my life. Thank you for your lovely words.xx

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el_wing January 30 2008, 23:03:21 UTC
I loved where Ennis takes Jack's hand-- and the imagery of the night sky filled with stars. This was beautiful. I thank you for writing this.

I needed to read, "Here I am."

Thanks.

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poppyhoney_67 January 31 2008, 11:54:42 UTC
Hi el_wing, thank you so much for your comment. Ennis taking Jack's hand....yes, I liked that too. Thank you too. x

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kmdlrd January 30 2008, 23:07:13 UTC
Just beautiful.
“What you doin’ here, anyhow?” Jack asked, watching Ennis closely.

Ennis grabbed Jack’s hand, locked their fingers together, and tenderly stroked Jack’s face.

“Waiting for you.”

Jack smiled and leaned in to Ennis's touch.

"Well," Jack said, "here I am."

"Yeah," said Ennis, leaning his forehead against Jack's. "Here you are."

I love those last lines. Ennis and Jack meant to be together always. Thanks so much for sharing. It made me feel better to read. Hopefully you feel better from writing. *Hugs* - B

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poppyhoney_67 January 31 2008, 11:55:49 UTC
hi B, thanks for a lovely comment. and I am glad you felt better after reading it, it helped me and made me feel better. I had planned to end at "waiting for you" but ennis and Jack had other plans. xx

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