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Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 13, part 2

Apr 30, 2008 12:49

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Rating: NC-17
Thanks: To Keren, Rosie and Matthew for all your help and encouragement with this chapter.
Feedback: Oh yes please!! I appreciate every word.
Dedication: To Em, for always being so ( Read more... )

poppyhoney_67, au!au, bbm, middle of nowhere

Comments 19

fridayblues May 1 2008, 02:21:11 UTC

Hi :)
I was going to scream if you stop at that! Now I'm happy. Heh. I have one more chapter to eat. Yum.
xxx

poppyhoney_67 May 2 2008, 10:33:54 UTC

Hi blues! Thanks for your comment. I had to cut it in 2 as it was so long!! LOL I hope you liked the next part too.

bbmjack324 May 1 2008, 03:27:29 UTC

Finally a night away 2gether and on Jack's birthday! Ennis doctoring and caring for Jack's blistered hands was really wonderfully sweet. Shows how much he cares, as does him planning this birthday getaway.

poppyhoney_67 May 2 2008, 10:34:21 UTC

Hi bbmjack, thanks for your comment. Ennis cares and wants to show Jack.

big_heart_june May 1 2008, 06:59:13 UTC

I think it's so incredibly sweet they keep each others t-shirts under their pillows, I'm so glad you included that. :)
OMG, I really hope no one heard what Meli said!
I LOVE how Ennis took care of Jack's hands *sigh* you wrote that so beautifully.
LOL @ the beans!

WOW, Christine, this is such a looong update! You spoil us. :) I'm running to the next part, thank you! ♥

poppyhoney_67 May 2 2008, 10:34:56 UTC

Hi June! Thanks for your comment, you always say such lovely things! Hope you enjoyed the next part too.

sweetje May 1 2008, 07:36:19 UTC

Well, it was a good start to Jack's birthday celebration, even if they did have to make the detour to the bar to satisfy everyone's curiosity first. But they're alone together now, and if Ennis's paranoia doesn't get the better of him, I have the feeling Jack will have the best birthday of his life tonight.
I can hardly wait for the next part of this fantastic story. : )
Debra

poppyhoney_67 May 2 2008, 10:35:38 UTC

Hi Debra, thanks for your comment...yes, you're right about the trip to the bar, Jack didnt want to go but he only did it for Ennis. Hope you enjoyed the next part too.

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poppyhoney_67 May 2 2008, 10:36:17 UTC

Hey pj, I assume woo-hoo is pj-speak for saying you liked it!!