Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 14

Jun 03, 2008 22:05

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Rating: NC-17
Thanks: To Em (smilesalot) for all your help and support, even when you are busy, you always help me, so thank you.
Feedback: Oh yes please!! I appreciate every word.
Dedication: To Keren ( Read more... )

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r_o_l_i_e June 4 2008, 13:20:41 UTC
hi Christie,
I love this chapter as much as I love all the others.
But the tent scene was delicious!!!!

I so much like the way they talk to eachother.


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poppyhoney_67 June 5 2008, 08:32:45 UTC
Hi Caroline, thanks for your comment, so glad you liked the chapter....and that you liked the tent scene, I'm really glad. Its nice to know that you like how they talk to each other, that means a lot as I never know if I'm getting the dialogue right. Thanks Caroline...

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TENT SCENE NO. 3!!!!! rightwhere_u_r June 4 2008, 16:42:51 UTC
you have done another fantastic job at capturing Jack and Ennis, YOUR Jack and Ennis ... I have to admit that I hardly read fanfic anymore, I'm just done with it, but I do love to come back to your story, hope you take them to a good place.... now get working on that Shelter fic.... :PPP lots of hugs
from me (I am typing this on my PDA, sorry for any mistakes..)

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Re: TENT SCENE NO. 3!!!!! poppyhoney_67 June 5 2008, 08:42:56 UTC
Hey Mel!!!!! Thanks so much for your comment! Tent Scene number 3! Wow, I hadnt even considered that!!! lol Thanks so much for your support and I feel honoured you love this even though you dont read fics any more....and as for the Shelter fic, give me a couple of days ;)

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landofthedragon June 4 2008, 19:23:00 UTC
Being together while not being together If you know what I mean?????? will be such sweet torture for them. You write the love stuff so sweetly christy it's enough to make the heart soar. Their so young to have such strong feelings for one another and I do worry what might happen when it's time for them to return home. I'm kinda hoping that they get to ride off in the sunset together preferably on a white horse????? those boy's sure do know how to ride LOL!!!!

Love this story Christy can't wait for you're shelter offering if the writings this good.

Hugs Lesley

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poppyhoney_67 June 5 2008, 08:44:40 UTC
Hi Lesley, thanks for your comment. So glad you liked it! I know they are young and its worrying about whats going to happen but bear with me ok? All I can say is, I am a happy ending girl....and I hope you like my shelter one-shot, when I actually write it! lol

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mel0804 June 5 2008, 22:28:36 UTC
I smell some trouble....
Great chapter !

Thank you so much !!

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poppyhoney_67 June 10 2008, 19:04:19 UTC
Hey Mel! Thanks for your comment, I'm glad you liked it. Watch this space.....

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120cassie June 7 2008, 14:03:53 UTC
Oh I'm a bit late to the party... Work is manic but I saw this and also Shelter one shot!!YAY!!

I *love* the way Jack and Ennis's relationship has developped.. I liked the description of Jack when asleep and Ennis just thinking and eventually touching...

Need more though.. But I need to read your Shelter offering now..

Sending hugs
Julie

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poppyhoney_67 June 10 2008, 19:05:04 UTC
Hey Julie! So glad you liked this, I'm flattered really. For reading this AND Shelter..Thank you.

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