I See You - A Shelter one-shot

Jun 06, 2008 20:46

Title I See You
Rating: NC-17
Universe: Shelter
Pairing: Zach and Shaun
Disclaimer: The characters you recognize are property of Jonah Markowitz.
Feedback: Yes please!

Author's Note: This is my first attempt at writing something outside the BBM fandom. I'm kind of nervous, so please be gentle with me. I have set this one-shot around the ( Read more... )

shelter, i see you

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sienata June 7 2008, 04:20:49 UTC
this was really nice... i've not read any of the S/Z stories yet, this is my first one, but i really liked it. I'll be watching for more. Great dialogue, like everyone else is saying, very sensual and loving and hot.... everything i like in my love scenes. :)

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poppyhoney_67 June 7 2008, 13:49:52 UTC
Hi Jane, thanks for your comment....thanks so much for what you said, I'm really glad you liked, it was a little scary to write names other than Ennis and Jack.

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tizi17 June 7 2008, 07:37:06 UTC
great job my dear.. really liked it...!
happy birthday marjoleine!

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poppyhoney_67 June 7 2008, 13:50:18 UTC
Hi Fausta! So glad you liked it, thanks for reading and commenting...xxxx

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equally_dour June 7 2008, 09:10:05 UTC
Zach travels south and lands a precious and delicate kiss on the hollow of Shaun’s belly.

Oh, my god what an image. *thud, drool, ded*

That was so lovely, their love shines through. Can we hope for more? Pretty please?

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poppyhoney_67 June 7 2008, 13:50:57 UTC
Hi Kate, thanks so much for your comment. And glad you liked that image! I loved writing it!!!!

I dont know about more...need to write my BBM fic first, maybe after that? But thanks...

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rosiet June 7 2008, 09:24:02 UTC
Wow!!! I LOVED it!!! Christie, this was fab, sweet, hot, tender...the lot. Great Job Girl!!! Thank you!!

...and Marj....HAPPY BIRTHDAY GIRL!! XOXO

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poppyhoney_67 June 7 2008, 13:51:22 UTC
Thanks Rosie, so glad you liked it....tried to put everything in there, so glad it worked!!!

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120cassie June 7 2008, 14:14:29 UTC
Hi Christine

You did it! And you sounded unsure before.

You made a *great* job of it.. The sexy talk was HOT.. very vivid imagery.. *ded*

I'm listening to the soundtrack while reading this..

Sending hugs and fingers crossed for more
Julie

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poppyhoney_67 June 10 2008, 18:59:40 UTC
Hey Julie, so glad you liked this! And listening to the soundtrack must have made it even better!! lol So glad it worked for you. There might be more, watch this space.

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