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[poppyhoney_67]

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Rating: NC-17 for the whole story
Thanks: To Em (smilesalot) for your fast turnouaround and great help with this chapter, and to Keren for your constant support. 
Feedback: Oh yes please!! I appreciate

Comments

[poppyhoney_67]

Thanks Lindsey, I don't think there were any spare cigarettes, so I hope you didn't faint or anything lol I'm so glad you liked the motel scene....I always wonder lol

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Middle Of Nowhere Chapter 20

[bmshirts]

Great chapter!!! It's so nice to see the two men away from the camp and in the privacy of a motel room. Free to explore and make love to each other without having to worry about others walking in on them. Their love has only deepened and they are ready to face the world together. They will have to face Ennis' brother, Alma and Jack's parents. But they have each other now. And that is all they really need. And leaving Maine they are very close to Massachusetts or Connecticut where they can be legally married before they go on to make their future together.
Can't wait till the epilogue. Meanwhile, have a great holiday season.
Thanks. Carole

Re: Middle Of Nowhere Chapter 20

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Carole, thanks for a lovely comment,I'm really glad you liked the chapter...it was important they had that time to themselves, before the real world took over. Thanks for reading :)

Middle of Nowhere, Parts 1 and 2 Chapter 20

[ennis4me]

What a great story that just keeps getting better! I loved how the boys were able to really relax for the first time, behind closed doors, where nobody could bother them....

The lovemaking was beautifully done and intense - their desire for each other was just amazing.

Thanks so much - still looking forward to more!! Adrianne

Re: Middle of Nowhere, Parts 1 and 2 Chapter 20

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Adrianne,thanks for your comment, I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and the lovemaking scene in particular, that was hard to write ;) I'm going to get started on the christmas one shot next week, otherwise it wont be a christmas one-shot!! Thanks for reading :)

great!!

[zankou164]

it was amazing!!
hot sex *drools on keybord*. i cant quite beleive its over and i very much look forward for the christmas one shot :)

Middle of nowhere

[argentine65]

This has been quite a journey that sadly is getting to and end but our boys are going to be happy together no matter what the future brings. I love this story from the start and I like the way you writted it with all those bits of canon and the other wonderful characters. Thank you so much for this story and for the rest of your writings. Martha

Re: Middle of nowhere

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Martha Thanks for your comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading :)