PDB Writing class stuff....

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'She was at once dark and light. A ******* effect that was instantly captivating to the eye. There were blushes of rouge with glitter, there was stars and stripes at my window. Technicolor. She was petite but diametrically perfect, although I shudder to use such a mechanical and scientific word. Years of science for the sake of it has reduced

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I very much doubt you wrote that explicitly for my entertainment 5 or 6 years ago and as you give me little else to go off (apropo nothing) i don't really know how to respond. Do i know you? Irrelevant really, anyway, thanks for sharing, I stopped using buses/public transport when i started seeing the same things

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what do you mean by 'definitive version' and 'move it forward'? i think this is one of the best things i've ever read that you've written.