Does my voice for Jean Louis feel inconsistent? Do you want to suggest other improvements? Share ideas for plotting? Then please comment to this post! I'm a lot nicer than my character (here's a ♥ to prove it!) and value concrit, no matter how you phrase it.
[Player]: K.
[E-mail]: artisticjulie [at] hotmail [dot] com
[IM]: AIM : sykolojikal