Prompt Post Round 2

Jun 01, 2011 12:11

Rules~ Prompt Post Round 1~ Fills Round 1~ Discussion

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The Wheat Field (warning: contains violence! and later sexytimes) anonymous June 12 2011, 12:21:52 UTC
She grit her teeth, fists clenching and unclenching as she struggled to keep her head clear of the drowsiness that threatened to overwhelm her. Across the room, she could see Wheatley, long limbs sprawled inelegantly as he lay face down in the rubble he had created. Dead? She wasn't sure; didn't know if it was even possible to kill these strange no-longer-humans that Aperture had created. After all, she'd originally thought she'd managed to kill Gladys, and yet the strange woman with the amber eyes was nestling herself back into the cradle of wires that dominated the chamber as if she'd never been away ( ... )

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Re: The Wheat Field (warning: contains violence! and later sexytimes) anonymous June 12 2011, 17:14:08 UTC
OP here!

oh, i am loving this! Gladys' little bit of revenge on Wheatley had me giggling like a maniac, and Chell's reaction to the outside was sweet and sad at the same time. And:

"Why?" His voice was desperate and bewildered. "Why are you always trying to kill me lately?"

I love this line. oh god i love this whole fill so far and i can't wait for the rest! I feel like the luckist anon in the world! all of my love, authoranon~ <3

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Re: The Wheat Field (warning: contains violence! and later sexytimes) anonymous June 13 2011, 08:50:09 UTC
authoranon here: I'm so pleased to hear that, OP! I wasn't sure whether I was being violent enough (or too violent) so knowing that you're enjoying reading it as much as I'm enjoying writing it is the best incentive t continue!

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