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Prompt Post Round 2

Jun 01, 2011 12:11

Rules~ Prompt Post Round 1~ Fills Round 1~ Discussion

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Power Struggle (Chell/evil!human!Wheatley) anonymous June 8 2011, 03:44:44 UTC

Seeing her former best (and maybe only) friend gone mad with power makes Chell sad and angsty, but it also pisses her off. Wheatley's pretty mad, too; he feels that Chell has betrayed him by going off the rails with GLaDOS instead of doing his tests. By the time she finally confronts him, they are both itching (ha) for a fight.

I want to see Chell and Wheatley in an all-out, fist flailing brawl that somehow becomes rough and tumble sexytimes, but with an undercurrent of affection. So not hatesex, but angry, angry lovemaking. Bonus points for including biting, if that's not too squicky <3

Re: The Wheat Field pt4 (brawl time) anonymous June 14 2011, 17:37:25 UTC

Authoranon: Definitely not! I'm just so glad that you're enjoying my work, and that someone else shares my violence kink.

Hope part 5 meets with your approval...

Re: The Wheat Field pt4 (brawl time) anonymous June 14 2011, 10:29:23 UTC

This is delicious and wonderful and I love you.

The Wheat Field pt5 anonymous June 14 2011, 17:35:08 UTC

Chell was torn. She felt a strong urge to continue hurting Wheatley some more for what he'd done to her. But another part of her wanted to keep him here, on top of her... maybe to even let him win a little, just to see what he'd do. It was strange how closely related the urges seemed ( ... )

Re: The Wheat Field pt5 anonymous June 14 2011, 18:19:54 UTC

Gah! Could this fill be any hotter?

Re: The Wheat Field pt5 anonymous June 14 2011, 21:35:08 UTC

No. It would be physically impossible. ♥_♥

Author!non note anonymous June 14 2011, 18:47:23 UTC

First off, I'd like to say thanks to everyone who is reading and leaving such supportive feedback. Thanks guys :D

Second: holy fuck. It's weird when you're going around with something in your head, and then you find that completely independent of you, someone has drawn that exact thing exactly... It happened to me with Makhani's Half-Life 2 art, and now it's happened again.

Ladies and gentlemen: I give you Siins http://siins.tumblr.com/tagged/portal

Re: The Wheat Field pt5 anonymous June 15 2011, 03:23:31 UTC

OP would say something praise-like here but she is too busy being passed out with giddyness.

"to even let him win a little, just to see what he'd do."

this line made me swoon a bit. you are THE best, anon! keep going~ <3

The Wheat Field pt 6 anonymous June 15 2011, 16:27:42 UTC

Wheatley's breath heavy in her ear. She reached down and wrapped her had around his girth, aiming to guide him into her, but he gasped harshly and slapped her hand away. He placed one hand flat on her belly, holding her down, while his other hand made futile attempts to restrain both of her wrists at once. Then they were wrestling again, laughing and breathless, because it was for fun, this time. They both wanted the same thing, but neither of them wanted to give the other the satisfaction of knowing it. Chell's nipples were so hard they ached, and she could feel drops of his precum glazing her belly and thighs as she writhed against him ( ... )

Re: The Wheat Field pt 6 anonymous June 15 2011, 20:09:36 UTC

oh please don't stop!

Re: The Wheat Field pt 6 anonymous June 16 2011, 01:03:31 UTC

God damn, authornon, this is like eating sugar with my brain.

Re: The Wheat Field pt 6 anonymous June 16 2011, 19:39:49 UTC

OP here and oh man alive~

to go from the beautiful violence of the first chapters to the equally beautiful sweetness of this one~ the transition is so natural! This fill is perfect! Also:

"They were making love, but her body wanted him to fuck her."

i'm literally dizzy reading this~ <3

The Wheat Field pt7 anonymous June 17 2011, 14:16:22 UTC

Wheatley was moving faster now, his cheeks flushed and his eyes hooded as he murmured breathless, half-formed words in her ear. Chell gazed up at him, and felt nothing but annoyance. Not only did the little idiot think he could escape her righteous anger by being all sexy-sweet and puppydog eyes, but now he was about to come, and she had barely even got started ( ... )

argh, missing bit! anonymous June 17 2011, 14:20:03 UTC

It should say "I always knew that's what you really thought," he hissed, "but could a moron do this?" And so on...

Re: The Wheat Field pt7 anonymous June 17 2011, 16:31:23 UTC

GODDAMN ANON THIS IS THE FUCKING HOTTEST THING THAT HAS EVER EXISTED I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW IT IS POSSIBLE

Re: The Wheat Field pt7 anonymous June 17 2011, 17:10:42 UTC

Nnnngh...holy shit, this is awesome.
Dominant Wheatley has to be the best thing that has graced this earth.
ALL HAIL ANON!!

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