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Prompt Post Round 2

Jun 01, 2011 12:11

Rules~ Prompt Post Round 1~ Fills Round 1~ Discussion

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. all the evidence points in one direction |1| anonymous June 11 2011, 19:13:20 UTC

YEAH I'M DOING OTHER FILLS BUT THIS ONE BLINDSIDED ME AT WORK.
SO...YEEEAAAH.
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Chell stepped into the main room, dragging both feet and struggling to push her hair out of her eyes. The last minute outburst of pouring rain had caught her midway through her walk home, and she'd been soaked to the bone. The carpet was already beginning to turn a deep brown where the filthy water slid off of her in little torrents, her clothing wrinkled and dripping, her skin pale from the cold. If there was anything she could ever miss from Aperture Laboratories, it was the controlled environments ( ... )

. all the evidence points in one direction |end| anonymous June 20 2011, 22:31:33 UTC

“Just like that.” Wheatley managed. “Me in you....like you're in me right now...I could...god, I would make you feel so good.” Incapable of resisting, she brushed her thumb over the button, and the metal ball did something that could only be described as writhing. “Mmmmake...make you feel...everything-”

Eight, and he trembled, fighting to keep his iris on her. It was the brightest she'd ever seen it in that moment.

“You would love it.” His recorded voice breathed. “It would be fantastic...”

She was going to lose it. But not before he did.

Nine.

“Mmmnn.” He rocked forward and tried to hold himself against her cheek, the frame of his optic moving as if to rub against her. Words tumbled out of him then, nonsensical save of the errant observation that she would be so wet, so tight, and he was betting he wouldn't be able to stand it. He would kiss her senseless if he could, and she sank her teeth into his upper handlebar to mute the cry that shook out of her chest at that. Chell's body could no longer hold itself up, and slid down ( ... )

Re: . all the evidence points in one direction |end| cypher_d June 20 2011, 23:00:49 UTC

Sweet, merciful crap.

Cypher D, We're done here.

Re: . all the evidence points in one direction |end| anonymous June 21 2011, 00:48:40 UTC

OH MY FUCKING GOD. TAKE MY LITTLE CERAMIC WHEATLEY I MADE! He's my most prized possession, but you deserve him. SO much, author!anon.

Re: . all the evidence points in one direction |end| anonymous June 21 2011, 02:06:16 UTC

SO FLATTERED THAT YOU WOULD OFFER HER YOUR WHEATLEY :D BUT I COULD NOT POSSIBLY TAKE HIM AWAY FROM YOU. IMPRINTING, YOU KNOW! BUT DO NOT FRET! THIS ANON HAS PLANS TO GET HELP FROM AN ENGINEER/COMPUTER FRIEND TO CREATE A MOTION-CAPABLE EXTERNAL HARDDRIVE SHAPED/DESIGNED LIKE WHEATLEY. :D

[/complete nerd]

Re: . all the evidence points in one direction |end| anonymous June 26 2011, 07:43:47 UTC

...Mother of god. Surely this is the purpose for which the universe was designed. It'll probably end after you succeed because nothing could ever reach a higher level of perfection.

Re: . all the evidence points in one direction |end| anonymous June 21 2011, 03:46:53 UTC

HOLY FUCKING GOBSTOPPERS BATMAN I LOVE YOU SO HARD U WISH I NO LOVE U SO HARD!!

no seriously, that was incredible. the diction you used, the fluidity and emotions you infused with the story was astounding. I for one cannot believe how terribly amazing that was. I loved Wheatley in this--his flustered confused ecstatic self was perfectly written.

now if you'll excuse me, I must go clean off my keyboard.

Re: . all the evidence points in one direction |end| anonymous June 21 2011, 09:08:03 UTC

Holy shit.

............

HOLY SHIT.

Okay I just
No, there is no explanation nor a proper reaction to this utter MASTERPIECE.

All the awards. Take them. They're designed especially for you.

Re: . all the evidence points in one direction |end| artisticdr34ms June 22 2011, 04:27:29 UTC

I... I....

... I love you...

Re: . all the evidence points in one direction |end| anonymous June 23 2011, 04:56:43 UTC

<333333333333333333333

Brain not now functioning. Holy crap.

Re: . all the evidence points in one direction |end| anonymous June 23 2011, 19:08:39 UTC

this kink meme was my first experience with mechanical porn. this fill has me cinvinced that mechnical is the best kind of porn.

it also has me convinced that you are the best authoranon ever~ <3

RE: Re: . all the evidence points in one direction |end| anonymous January 6 2017, 21:14:13 UTC

me too

Re: . all the evidence points in one direction |end| anonymous June 27 2011, 21:26:42 UTC

For the sweet love of Science, anon. I am... there are no words. :U
That was fantastic. Absolutely fantastic. My life is complete now that this fic is in it.

Re: . all the evidence points in one direction |end| anonymous July 1 2011, 03:10:18 UTC

This fill. Unf.
ALL MY LOVE, ANON
ALL MY LOVE

Re: . all the evidence points in one direction |end| anonymous August 10 2011, 13:27:40 UTC

This is the best. I think my skin caught on fire reading this hotness~

Re: . all the evidence points in one direction |end| anonymous August 26 2011, 16:35:01 UTC

Oooohh~ That is... Man alive, this is perfection!

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