Prompt Post Round 3

Jul 07, 2011 11:03

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You all know the drill by now. Prompts go here! A new post will be made at 3000 comments. Please link your fills to the Round 3 Fill Post.

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Portal completely turned on its head. anonymous July 18 2011, 02:24:16 UTC
Ok, anons, bear with me- I just had a crazy idea. I want a retelling of the Portal games, but with one aspect changed.

All the humans (ie. Chell, Rattman) are robots in the vein of Atlas/P-Body. All the robots/AIs are human scientists.

Just think about it.

-Aperture Science has struggled with years of bankruptcy after the death of its CEO. Former secretary, the scientifically immoral and slightly crazy Caroline, reestablishes the company and continues her boss' legacy by comencing testing of the Portal Device.

The droid created to test it, CHELL, proceeds extremely well through the chambers. That is, until she exceeds the capabilities of her limited AI, becomes self-aware and escapes. In the process she seriously injures Caroline and damages the facility before she can be restrained.

She is put on the redemption line to be properly destroyed, but rescued by a severely damaged droid with a penchant for art, and his human companion, a sacked Aperture worker and put into stasis deep in Aperture ( ... )

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Re: Portal completely turned on its head. spectrumleaf July 18 2011, 02:31:20 UTC
OH MAN
I WANT THIS SO MUCH

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Re: Portal completely turned on its head. anonymous July 18 2011, 04:15:14 UTC
This needs to be a long, in-depth, action-packed, and touching fic right the fuck now.

I hope someone picks this up.

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Re: Portal completely turned on its head. anonymous July 18 2011, 08:52:41 UTC
Anon can't get it out of her head that CHELL was Cave's solution to Caroline's desire for a daughter at some point. (All things considered, it was probably a less crazy and immoral point.) Caroline objected. Heavily. Cave went on with it anyways. On Cave's death this project to create an "artificial human" was halted - until a considerably-less-sane Caroline went and picked up the pieces and mashed it into a droid for testing. Much angst cranked up to eleven ensues.

...damn anon wants to write now. Anon has not written fanfic in years. Anon will proceed and retreat into a wall. ._.

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Re: Portal completely turned on its head. burninglemons July 18 2011, 13:22:23 UTC
But wait! That wall was a panel and it has pushed you back out. XD

aka don't be afraid to write! This is the kinkmeme and we will love whatever you give us. And you have some great ideas.

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Re: Portal completely turned on its head. anonymous July 18 2011, 09:01:38 UTC
oh gods i'm so fucking tempted to write this.

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Re: Portal completely turned on its head. anonymous July 18 2011, 15:45:26 UTC
LET'S GET SOMEONE TO WRITE THE FUCK OUT OF THIS, STAT!

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The Pinocchio Dilemma [Prologue? (1/2)] anonymous July 19 2011, 05:41:37 UTC
[Wallflower!anon here is shoved out by the panel. ._. Why am I even doing this I’m more of an artfag what am I doing writing
IDEK if this makes sense and it probably veered off like woah from what OP intended. Apologies in advance. It really has been years since I wrote much of anything. Please be gentle.

Also, this CHELL and the CHELL that ends up running tests later are...very different. This one is nothing like the human Chell we know and love. or maybe anon just fails at writing characters in-character orz

Fun side note: wallflower!anon ships GLaDOS/Chell so hard and wants to write it but translating that into this context I dug myself into is a little TOO creepy. Oops.]

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“Listen, Mr. Johnson, I do not want this!”

The first thing that her sensors registered as her internal processes came online was the sound of a woman’s voice. It was a good voice, she decided. Beautiful, her processors supplied after a few milliseconds of pondering. There was something soft and pleasant about the patterns of ( ... )

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The Pinocchio Dilemma [Prologue? (2/2)] anonymous July 19 2011, 05:43:25 UTC
”Hello, and, again, welcome to the Aperture Science Android Enrichment Center.”

The second time she woke up, CHELL found herself in a glass cage being greeted by a strange voice with all the sentiments of ice.

”Your re-calibration results have been processed, and we are now ready to begin the test proper.”

She thought she remembers having been woken up once, before, a long time ago, but try as she might she could not find any record of the event. Not even a time stamp exists in her to validate the feeling of distance between now and then.

”Basic testing information have been downloaded into your instructions database. Please consult it for answers to any questions during tests.”

CHELL thought she remembers a beautiful voice, from that time.

”Before we begin, the Enrichment Center would like to remind you that any and all reactions to stimuli are only responses produced by your programming, and we strongly advise that you reserve your processing power for testing rather than questioning your own purpose.”A voice she was supposed ( ... )

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OP is eternally grateful anonymous July 19 2011, 08:06:09 UTC
Oh, wallflower!anon. Get back here and let me hug you!

Never would have imagined I could get a fill so quickly! And I absolutely LOVE your idea about CHELL being a 'daughter' of Caroline's. It just fits right into the whole twisted canon of the entire thing. It's brilliant. I don't know how I can thank you.

It's ok- I'm more of an artanon myself, so I know how you feel. ^^

I am so looking forward to this.

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Re: The Pinocchio Dilemma [Prologue? (2/2)] anonymous July 19 2011, 09:59:14 UTC
oh please oh please oh please write more i wanna know your take on wheatley in this scenario <3

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Re: The Pinocchio Dilemma [Prologue? (2/2)] burninglemons July 19 2011, 13:46:01 UTC
Pushing you back out was the best thing the panel has ever done.

This is fabulous so far. CHELL's bewilderment is really believable and kind of endearing. And even though Caroline is still the antagonist here, I have quite a bit of sympathy for her. It's one of those situations where you want a character to do the right thing, but know that they probably won't, and those are always enjoyably maddening. I already can feel for the characters and you've only got the first bit out!

tl;dr version: moar plz!

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Re: The Pinocchio Dilemma [Prologue? (2/2)] antirrhie July 19 2011, 19:23:30 UTC
Wallflower!anon has blown me away.

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Re: The Pinocchio Dilemma [Prologue? (2/2)] anonymous July 25 2011, 04:00:31 UTC
Very much looking forward to where this goes! it's looking good so far! C:

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wallflower!anon reporting not-dead anonymous July 29 2011, 07:07:44 UTC
a-anons you are all too kind. This is my first time trying to fill anything from any kink meme (since the last time I wrote fanfiction I was, like, what, 14? lol. Did kink memes even exist back then?) and you guys blow me away with the love. ;_;

Just poking my head in to say this isn't abandoned. There's just some pesky irl shit going on. Hopefully it'll clear up by next week.

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Re: wallflower!anon reporting not-dead anonymous October 12 2011, 06:29:41 UTC
:(

This anon really would like author!anon to finish posting up the fill. It's so brilliant. <3

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