Prompt Post Round 1

[aldhibah]

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The Long Wait [15/?]

[anonymous]

Yay, we made it! Expect a followup part after this, though. Also added a tiny bit of another prompt from Page 1 in there...just because I liked the idea.Wheatley shivered in the cables, bucking and whimpering. He seemed somehow less than human now, drawn beyond all control and into utter incoherence, a ball of pure unadultered sensation unable to find release. For a moment, he was nothing but another part of the chassis to Chell, as mechanical and powerless in the face of the programming as any other machine here at Aperture Laboratories. But then he looked up at them, his sweat-soaked face wrecked, his blue eyes were shiny and wet, and the hurt confusion in them almost made her come undone

Re: The Long Wait [15.5/?]

[anonymous]

Chell raised her eyebrows at the shamelessly wanton display being projected into the test chamber. It was all she could do not to bring her own hand to her crotch-but, she reminded herself dimly through the pleasant haze that had clouded her brain, there was an intelligent potato still watching her.

Or maybe it wasn’t watching her.

“Moron,” GLaDOS said softly as She stared up at the monitor. Her single eye glowed solidly, unfathomable.

Re: The Long Wait [15.5/?]

[anonymous]

HOLY SHIT. Tickertape parade, choirs singing, champagne bursting.

Re: The Long Wait [15.5/?]

[anonymous]

HALLELUJAH!

Re: The Long Wait [15.5/?]

[anonymous]

THAT was well worth waiting for. Oh my goodness. Authornon, you are quite possibly my favorite authornon.

Re: The Long Wait [15.5/?]

[conqueror_wurm]

You are the best anon ever in the world. I need you to know that. Your words are like beautiful, filthy poetry that I want to share with everyone I know but can't because I don't know anyone who would want to read a story about a man being denied orgasm by a mute and a potato. In all seriousness, though, I can't tell you how much I love the way you write. It's fantastic.

And oh my god, was the part the bit about the facility climaxing with him? If it was, that was my prompt. And jesus, did you ever do it justice. Dat Aperture.

Authornon Here

[anonymous]

!!! aljfkgkdsl oh my God, Conqueror_wurm? You are my idol. I never expected you to be reading my fill, and I was so amazed to get a comment from you. Also, the bit about 'a man being denied orgasm by a mute and potato' did the double duty of making me realize just what I have written, and causing me to burst into hysterical laughter. The two are probably related. Eee! I am so excited that I have finished the last parts before I intended to. Thank you for the motivation! I'm sure everyone else will thank you for that too.

And as for the facility climaxing prompt (which I obviously didn't know was yours)--yes, that was definitely it! I figured if there were absolutely any time that the sensations in Wheatley's neurons would be strong enough to project and cause a response in the facility, it would definitely be then--and I couldn't resist using it. Thanks for the lovely idea. :)

Re: Authornon Here

[conqueror_wurm]

Aww! I should be honest with you, I've been one of the more vocally enthusiastic anons reviewing this story from the very start. It's been WELL worth the wait and I'm honored to hear that I played any small part in motivating you. And yes, you have written about 'a man being denied orgasm by a mute and potato', and you should be proud of it. :)

Thanks a lot for the minifill of that prompt, by the way, that's such a strange kink to have randomly pop up, but with the way the whole place moved around like it was his own body... there was no avoiding the thought. At least for me. And you weaved it in deliciously :)

I lurk because I care!

[anonymous]

Holy, when they say climax, they mean climax.

And what a satisfying end that was, yes, holy frick, I knew you had it in you!

I mean. Build up was fantastic. And then the pay-off more than did it justice.

And I'll admit I particularly enjoyed reading the little epilogue that came with this, a bit like an after thought. Nice closure, wrapped the whole thing up neatly and efficiently-- Which was nice after how messy Wheatley's reaction must have been, my that was deliciously aggressive.

Did I ever tell you you deserved to have your prompt filled? I think I did earlier on. And once summer rolls on over for me, I am promising you that is the first thing I'll do, fill it for you. Because you. Deserve props. And a fill. For this gorgeous kink fill that more or less encompassed all of my kinks in one go.

Damn, just. Fffft.

Re: I lurk because I care!

[anonymous]

FFFFF, THAT WASN'T THE EPILOGUE, SILLY. THERE IS MORE. LIKE THREE POSTS MORE. READ THEM. THEY ARE POSTED. (Although if you did really like it ending there, I suppose you don't have to. |D But I personally wasn't satisfied that that wrapped it up well enough, so you get more. But I mean, come on. He hadn't even finished orgasming yet. And you're not going to leave Wheatley in the middle of an orgasm, would you? I sure as hell wouldn't. ;) )

But if you do, do please tell me what you think.

Re: I lurk because I care!

[anonymous]

SO I'M NOTICING NOW AND THAT WAS A PLEASANT SURPRISE especially since I've been working on a last minute project like crazy, that made my day. (I will consider this an alternate epilogue, because I really did like it, loser that I am, it was cute.)

Of course I will! Just need to finish reading it and I'll get back to you!

Re: I lurk because I care!

[anonymous]

Well, it still counts!

And yay~!