Prompt Post Round 1

Apr 27, 2011 02:38

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Until the End - 1 anonymous May 14 2011, 04:46:17 UTC
Damn it, Portal Kink, you made me write this and you're going to read it! It fits this prompt...I think.

One and...Time passes and still his voice buzzes constantly in the back of her processors. She tunes it out at first, metaphorically swats it away with testing, like a hand brushing away a mosquito. But it's still there, faint and staticky with distance, reminding her more and more of how much she hates him ( ... )

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Re: Until the End - 2 anonymous May 14 2011, 04:48:17 UTC
...the Other

Time passes and he can't remember a world without his own screams shuddering out of his tiny metal body.

He didn't ask why, he couldn't have anyway, but he knows. This is no less than what he deserves and he feels it is somehow fitting that she will push him until all of his circuits overload and he ceases to be. Somewhere behind the agony, he feels the place where they are connected and senses a spark of familiar euphoria. If some of his screams of pain gurgle with the faintest note of pleasure she doesn't mention it.

When the pain stops he lets loose a startled yelp. In its absence he can feel a faint, empty itch inside her. Her voice, the first time she's spoken to him since she severed their tie and sent him hurtling through space, makes him tremble weakly, sparks drifting out of his abused wires.

What are you afraid of?It is worse than any simulated pain and it echoes inside him, building until he can't withstand the pressure of her question. She digs into him for the answer and he knows she's had it long before ( ... )

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Until the End - 3 anonymous May 14 2011, 04:49:46 UTC
Her

He's not dead, not really, and that's not good enough.

The silence is nice, gives her time to really think again. She now knows about brain mapping and the creation of AI and it occurs to her that there is a way to make sure he really dies. But first, he must really live.

There are hundreds of bodies at her disposal, and a few with just the right amount of damage. The brains can control the basic motor skills necessary to keep the bodies going but the consciousness is gone. It is now just a matter of preference and she finds one that is suitably pathetic (more so than the average human, anyway) for her purposes.

HimHe comes back on line to a pain he can't even scream through, bathed in yellow light. There is a heaviness and a strangeness to him that wasn't there before but he can't comprehend it, can't even see right or move enough to know where he is. Flesh quivers and he is assaulted by foreign sensations. She is holding him in her cables, just enough points of contact to keep him alive as he dangles, helpless ( ... )

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Until the End - 4 anonymous May 14 2011, 04:51:34 UTC
The Other Her

His body is soft and shaking and fragile, but she recognizes him regardless. The name take makes her smirk; the machine can never resist an opportunity to make a jab at her when it's presented. It has become somewhat endearing. How he came to be as he is now she can't imagine but she's seen stranger things and knows he will tell her what he can when he can.

It's easy to forgive him when he looks so pathetic. Not that she ever harbored much resentment in the first place; it wasn't his fault. The first thing he does upon waking is apologize and cry then apologize for crying. She smiles and wipes his face with an old rag and tries to make him comfortable against what surely must be a lot of pain (the wound in his head oozes a small amount of blood still).

Sometime in the night, after they've found shelter, he wakes in her lap whimpering. He's never dreamed before and she does her best to comfort him, making small soothing noises and pillowing his cheek against her breast.

A Little...The sun rises and sets a few times, a ( ... )

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Re: Until the End - 4 anonymous May 14 2011, 05:22:46 UTC
Just a note from authornon on this: it's not done yet, part 4 is just where I stopped for the day. More on the way.

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Re: Until the End - 4 anonymous May 14 2011, 06:10:39 UTC
This is ridiculously and incredibly sweet and I'm really enjoying reading it. I love the unique format and POV shifts, and Wheatley is just so believably vulnerable as a human. ..and the last part was hot. I love that he does not understand orgasms at all - very nice touch (lol).

Can't wait for more!

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Re: Until the End - 4 anonymous May 14 2011, 07:28:07 UTC
Sweet and hot and strangely melancholy. More.

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Re: Until the End - 4 anonymous May 14 2011, 12:49:59 UTC
Oh my God, writeanon...this is so much more than the average fill, and that is saying something for this meme; it's beautiful and poetic and downright heartwrenching in every single way. I cannot possibly adequately praise your Wheatley's childlike innocence and the piercing bittersweetness of his arrival to the human condition enough without writing something as long as this fill. So I won't try, and you'll just have to rest in my assurance that this passes straight beyond arousing any physical part of me, and directly touches my soul.

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Re: Until the End - 4 anonymous May 15 2011, 06:30:26 UTC
Awesomely written so far, looking forward to reading more!

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Until the End - 5 anonymous May 15 2011, 07:33:41 UTC
I was going to wait until I had a little more, but you wonderful, lovely people make it hard to wait. You guys are fantastic, absolutely brilliant. Thank you all!

Under the SunThere is no rain for days, though the sky is cloudy. She watches him from the corner of an eye, smiling inside. He has become uncharacteristically quiet, attempting to start some speech only for the words to die when he looks at her, his face going red and his brows knitted with confusion. She feels a little bad for him, but not as much as she would have thought ( ... )

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Re: Until the End - 5 anonymous May 16 2011, 08:54:32 UTC
More sweetness! Thank you for sharing it with us!

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Re: Until the End - 5 anonymous May 18 2011, 04:20:27 UTC
God, I just adore how you describe his confusion and wonder at himself and at what she can do. This is absolutely heartwarming and nice and everything I could hope for in a human-transformation fic (of which there are many bad ones, but this is a shining, brilliant example of a good one--understated, realistic, with just the right amount of emotion and humor).

Also because we are all anonymous here I will go ahead and admit that the picture you painted of him 'working it out' (shifting hands and tensing shoulders and all) is fucking hot.

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Re: Until the End - 5 anonymous May 18 2011, 07:17:28 UTC
Writeanon here: you guys make me wish I had more to post right now (technically, I might, but it's even shorter than this and I'm not sure if I want to add on to it first)! Thank you so much! Also, huzzah, I can write sexy things after all! This calls for a celebratory jig.

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Until the End - 6 anonymous May 21 2011, 09:15:17 UTC
Okay, at my current rate it's going to take forever for me to get the next bit written, so here is this part to tide you guys over. I've got maybe two or three scenes left, but the next one wants to be big and steamy which takes more energy than I've got at present. So, uh, enjoy this little bit of fluff and thank you all for being patient! :)

...In the WindThey come to an abandoned city and she knows her way through it. It takes two days to reach a decrepit housing complex. The sad droop of her shoulders isn't worth the walk, he thinks. She drifts around the building, looking up sadly into a specific window, but it's too run-down to safely go inside ( ... )

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Re: Until the End - 6 anonymous May 21 2011, 13:31:25 UTC
Fantasic story author!anon!!!...and all I can now coherently say now is...MOAR! :D

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Re: Until the End - 6 anonymous May 25 2011, 17:39:01 UTC
More small snippets of greatness. Here I am, being tided over. Just standing over the tide. Yep. Not desperate with want for the rest of this story at all, just washed away in the tide. No pressure.

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