Prompt Post Round 1
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As the initiator of this prompt I must admit that I never intended to write the part with human!Wheatley actually meeting up someone else, I was just interested in the.. eh.. solo side of the prompt. But I'm now toying with a side story with Chell after this is done, though.
Since this is looking kind of long, I'll divide it up into "sections" starting with this post, for future ease of reading. Hope this works.
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Will be following up on this.
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Attractive humans, he mused, had bodies whose shape varied down the length of them-not all straight down like his, but a different sort of shape, a really quite lovely one. Wide then narrow then wide again. Attractive humans had their soft bits situated in much nicer places than his. Attractive humans were shorter than he was, they had longer, smoother, dark hair, and-and small hands. Dainty hands. He pursed his lips and stared at his own. Grotesque.Attractive humans had smiles that rarely came, but when they did, they lit up even the darkest corridor. They always had this serious look on their face, like they might be mad at you but you couldn’t really be ( ... )
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And here, he’d discovered the first construct-the first thought-that brought a simple, positive feeling to this body. The thought of her.
Pushing away his memories of those awful hours during which all he wanted was for her to press buttons, then to die painfully, he focused simply on the thought of her, seeking a return of that warm little emotion he had never experienced before.
He closed his eyes.
Her hair was nearly the most striking thing about her-long, fairly long, but pulled back in a practical manner. Shiny as a newly-manufactured turret… only black. Not a very good comparison, actually.
Her eyes were nearly as striking as her hair, he continued, they were like-like crystals. The lightest blue he’d ever seen, nearly white. And always sharp, always alert, always watching for the next obstacle, the next puzzle to solve-
His body shivered a bit at the thought. Odd, he mused, frowning slightly. Must just be leftover from… from then. ( ... )
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He opted for staring at it, eyes wide in uncomprehending terror.
It didn’t do very much.
It did so little, in fact, that he soon overcame his initial terror to arrive at a more clinical curiosity. Just what the hell in this place would have the gall-or even the desire-to crawl up the pant leg of his jumpsuit and then just sit there? If it had murderous intent, it surely should have struck before then.
Biting his lip in trepidation, he brought a shaky hand up to his neck to grasp the zipper holding his jumpsuit on. You’ll have to find out sooner or later, he coached himself. If it jumps out, you can just-you can just pummel it until it’s dead, and then go back to thinking ( ... )
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He wondered if she had one too.
And with that, the thought of her returned to his mind. All soft and curvy and nice and-waitaminute.
It felt almost like an electric jolt running through his body-culminating there, at the thing laying innocently on his belly. It jumped a bit.
He stared in awe at the thing. He hadn’t-he hadn’t consciously tried to move it. There were parts of him that moved entirely on their own? Being human was considerably more complicated than he’d ever imagined. After the initial shock wore off, his mind continued its tangent all on its own.
-those curves and that smile and those legs, his brain reminded him insistently, those legs pumping up and down as she solved your ( ... )
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He knew he’d recognized this feeling. He knew it from the start. It wasn’t quite as intense as the euphoria had been-but this, this sensation, felt very similar to that which had so carried him away when she had solved-
He lost his train of thought instantly.
Beautiful, smart, kind, strong, soft, curvy-dirty-the sight of her breasts rebounding as she leapt to escape his deathtraps-her rump swaying heavily from side to side as she charged through yet ( ... )
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Second, I am very happy that the body you gave Wheatley was a reasonable one, and not perfect or unreasonably beautiful. Imperfections are what make people attractive, in my opinion, and the description was just so... so WHEATLEY. Wonderful job with that.
Thirdly, damn, this was sexy as hell. I prefer mechanical porn for this fandom, but I really, REALLY liked this fill, so that's saying a lot from me. You did an absolutely fantastic job, and I hope you do more, and if you do, OH BOY will I be excited.
Kudos, anon. I doff my imaginary hat to you!
(captcha says, "Tonfor man." Uh. Wat.)
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You should post this at ff.net or something. This deserves lots of readers.
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I have some more smut in mind in this storyline, so there will be at least two more parts, and I'm working on another prompt now too, so you haven't seen the last of me by far. I'm just a little busy for the next several days, so it might be a while before I can post it. I'll try to make it worth it!
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Please, do continue your epic fic of wonderfulness!!
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