One last day with her (Chell/Wheatley)
anonymous
June 1 2011, 04:51:59 UTC
Yeah, I totally didn't get this idea from the movie 'A.I.'... (I did.)
Wheatley comes crashing back to earth many many many years later, and humanity has died out. The only things left are Vortigaunts, cataloging the end of the human story, studying it if they are not the original generation that came over during the Black Mesa incident (idk maybe Vorts live forever if they aren't killed), or just inhabiting the planet as their own after the death of all the humans. They take an interest in Wheatley, the last A.I. created by humans and more-or-less the last human (going on the theory that personality cores were once human). All Wheatley wants is to say sorry and goodbye to a long dead girl, so the Vorts conjure up a fantasy or a body or whatever with their Vort magic. Wheatley gets one last day with Chell. I don't care what form Wheats takes, or if it's platonic or romantic, I just want angsty happy catharsis.
OP would write it herself if she had any confidence in her writing skills but will gladly draw all over the place for it!!
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Allies Inbound 1/?johnfreemannJune 9 2011, 03:24:11 UTC
(AUGH ASSHOLE NOW THIS IS GOING TO BE A HUGE FANFICTION DAMNIT ONCE I GET STARTED I CAN'T STOP AGUUUGHHHHHH and holy fuck coming up with a title is REALLY hard, I couldn't think of anything
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Re: Inbound 2/?johnfreemannJune 9 2011, 23:00:43 UTC
(Changed the title,writing for Vorts is HARD)
“AUUGH! What in the bloody hell-AUUGH!”.
The hideous thing looked at him in surprise with a large, single eye with a maroon sclera and a heterochromic red-yellow iris with a yellow pupil, surrounded by three smaller eyes, dominating its face. When it opened it's mouth it revealed its frighteningly sharp teeth (but no tongue or teeth on the bottom jaw??) as it watched him, carefully holding it in it's claws. It had mottled green-brown skin that looked shiny and smooth, unlike anything he had ever seen in his entire time being an Intelligence Dampening Sphere.
“Calm yourself, metal sphere. I do not wish to cause undue alarm.” He stopped, his prerecorded huffs of breathing filtering through his speakers. His entire core shook and rattled as the thing examined him
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Re: Inbound 3/?johnfreemannJune 9 2011, 23:16:26 UTC
"Yes, yes, sorry, I-i just needed to get that off of my conscience for a bit. A bit maddening after a while, all bottled up inside you.”
The thing merely looked at him, and if it had eyebrows they would be furrowed, contemplating on what to do.
“Do you recall the humans birth name?”
“Chell. Chell. Her last name was redacted in the files, there was almost nothing on her except that her name is Chell.”
“A vague chance of meeting her if only with a first name.”
Wheatley felt the hopelessness sink back into him once again and his plates drooped as he sighed.
“A description would benefit us greatly. Perhaps my kin have seen her.” His optic spun quickly as his mind raced, what if they had seen Chell? Oh if he had legs he would get on his knees and beg forgiveness, forgiveness for all that he has done, he was a horrible person and she deserved to be free and he deserved to be in space. But he had been given a second chance; he would not waste it. He would die trying to get to her
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I saw this and I think stars came into my eyes. *u*
Let me count the ways I love you forever aaaaaaaaaaaaah. This was the best thing ever to come back to after a loooong two days at work (I have to move a classroom for the fifth time this year guh). So far this is BRILLIANT and I am practically bouncing in my seat with joy and want for more. I'd say I was sorry for the huge fanfiction idea but I'M TOTALLY NOT because eeeeeee ♥. I love love Vorts and I love Illya and Wheatley and I love their confusion and I am so excited I just need to go draw art all over this forever because as this comment goes on I am getting less and less intelligible. Is there anything you would like me to draw for you in particular, oh John Freeman, Saver of Humens and this anon's week?
Oh my goodness I am SO GLAD someone finally commented! I posted it on FF.net but people are like "MORE!" and don't really give more depth than that. It's so nice to hear that SOMEONE actually liked it!!I'm having so much fun writing it, and I can't wait to post then next parts (oh god when they get to the camp I'm gonna laugh). I'm so glad it made your week!!It makes me want to write more! c: I should have more each day so check back constantly.
Hmmm, you should draw John Freeman with Wheatley and a headcrab. Or you can draw Illya and Wheatley. Either will do, whatever you want!! EEEEEEEEEEE I'm happy!!<3
I'm sad no one else has commented! People are missing out. I am glad you're having fun writing it because I am having fun reading it and sketching bits for it. I will check back as often as I can! Hopefully with sketches by Saturday. Work will be bearable tomorrow because of this fic. :)) Speaking of that I need to sleep, but not before I read the next part...
Re: Inbound 5/?
anonymous
June 10 2011, 05:05:29 UTC
You know what, I love OP so much and I want her to be happy that I shall post another part.
With a click his iris illuminated the area in front of them.
“The Wheatley has my gratitude, it is much easier to see the darkened path.”
“No, no no, you have my thanks. I thought for sure I was going to be rusting in that crater for centuries before I would give out. I really cannot tell you how happy I am that you saved me, I absolutely have to find Chell. It's dire.”
“When we rest I shall contact my kin. Then we may proceed. We shall try our best to find her.”
“Thank you. Thank you so much.” He replied, his shutter closing in relief. He knew he shouldn't get his hopes up, he could be on the other side of the world for that matter, but he felt it flood through his system anyways. That reminded him...
“Where are we, anyways?” he asked, looking up at Illya.
“We are located 23 miles from City 17.” Illya replied, trudging through the unkempt grass
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Re: Inbound 5/?
anonymous
June 10 2011, 07:23:18 UTC
OP loves the love ;u; and this happiness is all over her
I just love poor little confused Wheatley. He tries so hard.
Take a break well earned!! ..If I had time, I would be replaying those so hard myself right now (and subsequently beating my head because EP:3 still doesn't exist). Thank you for being so awesome ♥.
Re: Inbound 6/?johnfreemannJune 11 2011, 01:32:41 UTC
(Guh, writing was slooow today because all it was was paraphrasing the Combine Overwiki for the history bleh.)
“Because you guys were enslaved by them, right?” He said, looking up at Illya for approval.
“You are not entirely correct. We have endured these chafing bonds for eons by Nihilanth, and when the Combine arrived at Xen, we fled to Earth for safety.”
“So Nihilanth enslaved you, not the Combine?”
“Correct.”
“Okay, go on.”
“The Freeman had put the crystal in the Anti-Mass Spectrometer and escaped from the chamber. The Eli Vance had sent The Freeman to the surface to get help, and The Freeman went through the entire facility, fighting many of us Xen creatures and military along the way.”
“Wait, hold on a minute, their military? I mean, I understand him attacking you guys, I mean no offense but you were trying to kill him and all, but why the military? Aren't they supposed to help the humans?”
“They were sent to cover up the mess, killing anyone that knew about the project and cleaning up the mess they had made.”
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Re: Inbound 6/? (some art for you)
anonymous
June 12 2011, 03:29:07 UTC
Awesome as usual! :) Man I know how tiring getting the half life history right is, I spent literal hours on the overwiki for a quarter of the prologue of something I was writing. Anyways, I'm so excited for them to get to camp now I can't even aaaaa
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Re: Inbound 6/? (some art for you)johnfreemannJune 12 2011, 04:53:36 UTC
HAHAHAHOKMFGO I LOVE YOU SO MUCH I MEAN SERIOUSLY, I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD, I JUST LOVE THESE! The second picture sums up the entire 8-9 parts of the goddamn story i just wish it were that easy to explain!!! God this stuff is SO going on my hardrive. My hard drive is basically my life; it's got my most important files that I would die without on it, so this is TOTALLY going on number 1 skfjdfkgjdkrj oh god i love you i shall post as many parts as i can tonighhhhtttt because i love you and so does lamarr auuuuuuuughh!!
Oh my god I love gordon and how he's just sticking his butt out while petting the antlion xDD oh man that John Freeman one is my background now!I SHALL CHERISH THESE FOREVER!!! and once they get to camp, you are going to see some ooooolld friends of yours.
NO WAIT FUCK. I JUST TOTALLY SCREWED UP MY STORYLINE DAMNIT.AUGH WHY DIDNT I THINK THAT THROUGH?!Ugh, I'll work my way around it. I'll tell you when you get re-introduced, lol....BUT YOU MADE MY LIFE COMPLETE
Re: Inbound 6/? (some art for you)
anonymous
June 14 2011, 00:13:51 UTC
It's always easier in a picture, especially a stupid one. oversimplification is fun! but you're doing great with the fic, it's a joy to get a moment to check my mail and find an update.
Thank you for giving me such praise, haha! I love drawing, even if I'm still getting the hang of it, and love people enjoying it even more. I promise, more will come. C: I have an idea I just need to draw; Barney being a snarky doll at Wheatley and it passing right over his sweet, dumb head. What have you done to meeeee all I can draw is crossovers
and good luck! I know the pain of hitting an OH FUCK DID I WRITE THAT WRONG but I'm sure you'll figure it out ♥ /rereads all dese delicious parts
Wheatley comes crashing back to earth many many many years later, and humanity has died out. The only things left are Vortigaunts, cataloging the end of the human story, studying it if they are not the original generation that came over during the Black Mesa incident (idk maybe Vorts live forever if they aren't killed), or just inhabiting the planet as their own after the death of all the humans. They take an interest in Wheatley, the last A.I. created by humans and more-or-less the last human (going on the theory that personality cores were once human). All Wheatley wants is to say sorry and goodbye to a long dead girl, so the Vorts conjure up a fantasy or a body or whatever with their Vort magic. Wheatley gets one last day with Chell. I don't care what form Wheats takes, or if it's platonic or romantic, I just want angsty happy catharsis.
OP would write it herself if she had any confidence in her writing skills but will gladly draw all over the place for it!! ( ... )
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“AUUGH! What in the bloody hell-AUUGH!”.
The hideous thing looked at him in surprise with a large, single eye with a maroon sclera and a heterochromic red-yellow iris with a yellow pupil, surrounded by three smaller eyes, dominating its face. When it opened it's mouth it revealed its frighteningly sharp teeth (but no tongue or teeth on the bottom jaw??) as it watched him, carefully holding it in it's claws. It had mottled green-brown skin that looked shiny and smooth, unlike anything he had ever seen in his entire time being an Intelligence Dampening Sphere.
“Calm yourself, metal sphere. I do not wish to cause undue alarm.” He stopped, his prerecorded huffs of breathing filtering through his speakers. His entire core shook and rattled as the thing examined him ( ... )
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The thing merely looked at him, and if it had eyebrows they would be furrowed, contemplating on what to do.
“Do you recall the humans birth name?”
“Chell. Chell. Her last name was redacted in the files, there was almost nothing on her except that her name is Chell.”
“A vague chance of meeting her if only with a first name.”
Wheatley felt the hopelessness sink back into him once again and his plates drooped as he sighed.
“A description would benefit us greatly. Perhaps my kin have seen her.” His optic spun quickly as his mind raced, what if they had seen Chell? Oh if he had legs he would get on his knees and beg forgiveness, forgiveness for all that he has done, he was a horrible person and she deserved to be free and he deserved to be in space. But he had been given a second chance; he would not waste it. He would die trying to get to her ( ... )
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Let me count the ways I love you forever aaaaaaaaaaaaah. This was the best thing ever to come back to after a loooong two days at work (I have to move a classroom for the fifth time this year guh). So far this is BRILLIANT and I am practically bouncing in my seat with joy and want for more. I'd say I was sorry for the huge fanfiction idea but I'M TOTALLY NOT because eeeeeee ♥. I love love Vorts and I love Illya and Wheatley and I love their confusion and I am so excited I just need to go draw art all over this forever because as this comment goes on I am getting less and less intelligible. Is there anything you would like me to draw for you in particular, oh John Freeman, Saver of Humens and this anon's week?
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Hmmm, you should draw John Freeman with Wheatley and a headcrab. Or you can draw Illya and Wheatley. Either will do, whatever you want!!
EEEEEEEEEEE I'm happy!!<3
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With a click his iris illuminated the area in front of them.
“The Wheatley has my gratitude, it is much easier to see the darkened path.”
“No, no no, you have my thanks. I thought for sure I was going to be rusting in that crater for centuries before I would give out. I really cannot tell you how happy I am that you saved me, I absolutely have to find Chell. It's dire.”
“When we rest I shall contact my kin. Then we may proceed. We shall try our best to find her.”
“Thank you. Thank you so much.” He replied, his shutter closing in relief. He knew he shouldn't get his hopes up, he could be on the other side of the world for that matter, but he felt it flood through his system anyways. That reminded him...
“Where are we, anyways?” he asked, looking up at Illya.
“We are located 23 miles from City 17.” Illya replied, trudging through the unkempt grass ( ... )
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I just love poor little confused Wheatley. He tries so hard.
Take a break well earned!! ..If I had time, I would be replaying those so hard myself right now (and subsequently beating my head because EP:3 still doesn't exist). Thank you for being so awesome ♥.
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“Because you guys were enslaved by them, right?” He said, looking up at Illya for approval.
“You are not entirely correct. We have endured these chafing bonds for eons by Nihilanth, and when the Combine arrived at Xen, we fled to Earth for safety.”
“So Nihilanth enslaved you, not the Combine?”
“Correct.”
“Okay, go on.”
“The Freeman had put the crystal in the Anti-Mass Spectrometer and escaped from the chamber. The Eli Vance had sent The Freeman to the surface to get help, and The Freeman went through the entire facility, fighting many of us Xen creatures and military along the way.”
“Wait, hold on a minute, their military? I mean, I understand him attacking you guys, I mean no offense but you were trying to kill him and all, but why the military? Aren't they supposed to help the humans?”
“They were sent to cover up the mess, killing anyone that knew about the project and cleaning up the mess they had made.” ( ... )
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The second picture sums up the entire 8-9 parts of the goddamn story i just wish it were that easy to explain!!! God this stuff is SO going on my hardrive. My hard drive is basically my life; it's got my most important files that I would die without on it, so this is TOTALLY going on number 1 skfjdfkgjdkrj oh god i love you i shall post as many parts as i can tonighhhhtttt because i love you and so does lamarr auuuuuuuughh!!
Oh my god I love gordon and how he's just sticking his butt out while petting the antlion xDD oh man that John Freeman one is my background now!I SHALL CHERISH THESE FOREVER!!!
and once they get to camp, you are going to see some ooooolld friends of yours.
NO WAIT FUCK. I JUST TOTALLY SCREWED UP MY STORYLINE DAMNIT.AUGH WHY DIDNT I THINK THAT THROUGH?!Ugh, I'll work my way around it. I'll tell you when you get re-introduced, lol....BUT YOU MADE MY LIFE COMPLETE
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Thank you for giving me such praise, haha! I love drawing, even if I'm still getting the hang of it, and love people enjoying it even more. I promise, more will come. C: I have an idea I just need to draw; Barney being a snarky doll at Wheatley and it passing right over his sweet, dumb head. What have you done to meeeee all I can draw is crossovers
and good luck! I know the pain of hitting an OH FUCK DID I WRITE THAT WRONG but I'm sure you'll figure it out ♥ /rereads all dese delicious parts
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