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porysski
On english haiku, and why they annoy me
Mar 23, 2005 17:43
Pretentious poems flow
Like hailstones in false springtime
No substance, wet slush
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gillan
March 28 2005, 16:24:03 UTC
So easy to do
Just count out the syllables
Instant poetry!
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porysski
March 28 2005, 20:50:14 UTC
Seasonal mention
Adds to restriction of form
Space for "Spring" insuf--
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Just count out the syllables
Instant poetry!
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Adds to restriction of form
Space for "Spring" insuf--
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