Being Noble

[poseida9]

I am posting this to be comprehensive :) this is the link to it on the HPGW Ficafest

Title: Being Noble
Challenge: #58 (At-Hogwarts): Clumsy!Harry doesn't understand why Ginny thinks he's so noble.
Summary: "'I looked it up in the dictionary and nothing fits me,' he says, frustrated. 'All I am is clumsy and skinny and thick, and none of those are

Comments

[aphoenix2007]

Another excellent fic.

I liked the second person POV; it was a very interesting change from the usual third person I read. I haven't read a second person POV for ages now. :)

You roll your eyes: the git may be noble, but he snores something terrible. :D Nice ending.

Also, the way you centered this fic on the concept of being noble was very nicely done. Overall, this was a very well-written fic, but I liked that last part at the end, when you had Harry confused about why Ginny thought him noble. The comparisons between the past and later on were also a nice addition.

~AmethystPhoenix

P.S. Thanks for your review for Avocado! You know, I've never tasted an avocado...

[lisa_ab]

Amazing!

This story captured one of the things I like most about Harry as well as one of the things I like most about Harry and Ginny as a couple. Harry really DOESN'T see himself as anything special or nobel and Ginny sees all the special and nobel parts of him not b/c of the Voldemort stuff or the Quiddich stuff or whatever...but just b/c he is him :)

What a wonderful story!

[kareetard]

I agree, I don't normally like second person either, but it worked perfectly in this story. It was just wonderfully written! Definitely one of my favourite fics I've read lately.
Like lisa_ab said, I love how Ginny likes Harry for him, not just his fame, and that was perfectly portrayed in this fic! Well done :)

[profshallowness]

Really well written, especially when it came to capturing Ginny's feels.