H/G, PG, The Seasons

[poseida9]

V'la. I do not know how much you guys will like this; I wrote parts of it last night and finished it this evening, so. But I am really proud of it.

Feedback very appreciated.

Title: The Seasons
Summary: "He learned of a thousand things the summer he turned seventeen, none of which were obtainable, or even nearly so."
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,

Comments

[flyingcarpet]

I love it. Beautiful.

[poseida9]

Thanks :)

Psst, iconlove.

[tunxeh]

I like it a lot. I don't really have any detailed reactions at this point, I'm still letting it wash over me as a whole, maybe I'll have more later. But one edit: "He was not wearing a cloak, and when she came his real cloak out and his Invisibility Cloak out as well." - missing "she brought"?

[poseida9]

Good call! I edited it and changed that sentence, actually, because the Invisibility Cloak was a remenant of something I didn't end up writing. Thanks for catching it!

Thanks, also, for the review; I'm glad you liked the story :)

[secondsilk]

Right to be proud.
I loved the snow and the heat. So vivid, without being descriptive.