I love pieces like this that are slightly abstract and really make u pay attention to the little things. It was very well written and well paced. And I loved the tacky pink-plastic promise ring, that was just darling! So great job on this comeback piece and I hope to read more of ur writing soon.
hiiii I just gotta say I really loved this ^^ I always adore stories that are sparsely worded like this, only choosing the important things and such. it was very poetic and also completely endearing =]
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I always try to twist things slightly, and make people think more. I'm glad I achieved it! :D
:) I have some older pieces up, but I'll definately be posting more soon; I've got a whole folder full of finished stuff that I need to post!
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So lovely - I loved the sparse nature of this - you say so much with just the right amount of words. Thanks!
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Aha, don't worry, I do that all the time :)
That was one of my aims *g* I'm glad I managed it! :D
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I've never been called poetic before... *g*
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