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[postmodernsense]

if i have to read any amateur shitty poetry in live journals, im going to barf.

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[prouddragonfly]

what are you talking about?

[postmodernsense]

artsifartsitude.

[prouddragonfly]

i don't one farty thing you're talking about, but amateur fuckin poetry is so rad.....and so are the daves.....let's make some.

[digitalkiss]

these words that pour from your finger tips keep my heart beating
i have never had such safe sex
rubbing raw what you make wet
i am in love i am in lust
i want your whispers to meet my ear and your lips to meet my neck

how is that for shitty amateur poetry?

[postmodernsense]

that reminds me of that special night we spent at that bar. with nelson. that steamy, passionate night. i think that song "black velvet" best captured it.

where the hell do you live now?

[aphid]

In Williams building there is a sign on the bulletin board that says, in a nutshell, poetry sucks and its for losers. I'm gonna go wth my camera and take a picture cos its funny as shit, but I thought you'd appreciate it

No, you don't know me ... I know lefteyeislazy

[rhesusmonkeyboy]

Doing the "bored at work random-live-journal clackity-clack" ... enjoy this:

http://www.killpoetry.org/MT/archives/2003_07.shtmlYellow Heaven

I think a banana
to a monkey must be

Like a 5th of Jack Daniels
is to me

Heaven in a glass

Or in their case a peel

I imagine we consume
with similar zeal

So here's to you my simian friend
And those crazy things you do

Cause when I drink enough Jack
I fling poo too

Re: No, you don't know me ... I know lefteyeislazy

[postmodernsense]

a single tear falls down my cheek.

thank you for sharing.

eyes pop out.