You broke my heart dear. BROKE IN SUCH A DELICIOUS WAY IT MAKES ME CRAVE FOR MORE.
i HOPE you're happy >.>
You know, wouldn't it just be tragic if Gilbo and Lovi just faded away little by little during the party, without anybody noticing, only for at the end, their brothers go look for them only to see they at last dissapear without even managing to say anything? ZOMG TEH REI ANGST....my mind works in misterious ways...
All in all, you made this simple concept (unification) so heartaching sad it really strung a chord in my heart (I always had a softspot for Lovi + suffering.)...
100000000/10 IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAND!!!!!!!!!!! *shot*
At first I didn't understand why Lovino would go to Gilbert and suddenly just start sobbing, but then as I read bam yeah it hit me in the face and my heart broke in two.
I AM UNSURE OF WHICH EMOTICON TO USE. SO I'LL GO WITH BOTH: :D:
Holy shit. *has reread it 3 times*
OMG... I love this so fuckin' hard. It's so poignant and so freakin' heart wrenching and you hear that Prussia's still got an edge to his 'voice', even if he is tired. It's like a bitter edge though, and it's a slight one. Romano though! Oh, my darling Lovi!
This makes perfect sense! And dude, very original use of the prompt! You've written this beautifully.
It looks like you're the only participant. And I wish to hug and love you forever and ever for bothering to enter at all, let alone with this gorgeous piece. Seriously, thank you.
Ahhh thankyou for the lovely comment! I was a bit nervous about posting this since it's the first time I've written fanfiction but in the end I just had to screw up my courage and do it.
It broke my heart to write about Lovi like that. I mean, okay Gilbert isn't the most stable guy and I think most people realise that, but Lovino is just so... well, he's not usually portayed as having any major issues. And seriously, dude, that boy has so much wrong with him that is hardly ever touched upon in fandom, and the crippling inferiority complex is just the START of it.
Damn, I was really hoping someone else would enter so I wouldn't be alone lmao :I Well I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks again for reading ♥
First time!? I am impressed! Like, I was before, but first time? *glomps* You are awesome.
I know. Oh God, I know. I think he's one of the most fucked up of the cast - inferiority complex, his mind's more than a bit warped, doesn't know how to express himself, very low self confidence and now there's a group blaming him for Italy's economy problems, and I can only imagine what that's done to him... I suppose it's because he's got that rough, loud exterior up though.
XD You did really well~ And hopefully more people will join in the next one. Now that I know we're allowed to advertise on the main comm, I'm hoping the fact that more people will know earlier will start something.
...DAW ;A; There were pangs going through my heart for this whole fic...
I think you have their characters spot-on. So many people seem to write Prussia as being all silly and carefree after 1989, but here...oh my god, =A=. And Romano...
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You broke my heart dear. BROKE IN SUCH A DELICIOUS WAY IT MAKES ME CRAVE FOR MORE.
i HOPE you're happy >.>
You know, wouldn't it just be tragic if Gilbo and Lovi just faded away little by little during the party, without anybody noticing, only for at the end, their brothers go look for them only to see they at last dissapear without even managing to say anything? ZOMG TEH REI ANGST....my mind works in misterious ways...
All in all, you made this simple concept (unification) so heartaching sad it really strung a chord in my heart (I always had a softspot for Lovi + suffering.)...
100000000/10 IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAND!!!!!!!!!!! *shot*
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Oh jeez, that would have been too sad. I'd probably have cried. Damn why didn't I think of it :I
I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)
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Lovinoooooo ;~;
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I'm sorry it was unclear! I think I just got carried away since I already knew what was going to happen.
Thanks for the comment!
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Holy shit. *has reread it 3 times*
OMG... I love this so fuckin' hard. It's so poignant and so freakin' heart wrenching and you hear that Prussia's still got an edge to his 'voice', even if he is tired. It's like a bitter edge though, and it's a slight one. Romano though! Oh, my darling Lovi!
This makes perfect sense! And dude, very original use of the prompt! You've written this beautifully.
It looks like you're the only participant. And I wish to hug and love you forever and ever for bothering to enter at all, let alone with this gorgeous piece. Seriously, thank you.
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Ahhh thankyou for the lovely comment! I was a bit nervous about posting this since it's the first time I've written fanfiction but in the end I just had to screw up my courage and do it.
It broke my heart to write about Lovi like that. I mean, okay Gilbert isn't the most stable guy and I think most people realise that, but Lovino is just so... well, he's not usually portayed as having any major issues. And seriously, dude, that boy has so much wrong with him that is hardly ever touched upon in fandom, and the crippling inferiority complex is just the START of it.
Damn, I was really hoping someone else would enter so I wouldn't be alone lmao :I
Well I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks again for reading ♥
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I know. Oh God, I know. I think he's one of the most fucked up of the cast - inferiority complex, his mind's more than a bit warped, doesn't know how to express himself, very low self confidence and now there's a group blaming him for Italy's economy problems, and I can only imagine what that's done to him... I suppose it's because he's got that rough, loud exterior up though.
XD You did really well~ And hopefully more people will join in the next one. Now that I know we're allowed to advertise on the main comm, I'm hoping the fact that more people will know earlier will start something.
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Oh Lovino. So fucked up but I really do love him. I think he's a very interesting character; he has a lot of depth.
I'm sure it would help to make people aware earlier. I'll try not to do the next one at the last minute XD
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I think you have their characters spot-on. So many people seem to write Prussia as being all silly and carefree after 1989, but here...oh my god, =A=. And Romano...
I love you, I think, xDD.
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I really feel like Prussia would have been a shell of a man after 1989. I can't see him being 'the awesome me' at all :(
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INORITE!! It's so heart-breaking sometimes, xDD;;.
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That aside, sweet fic. The hurt&comfort was sweet c:
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Well, I can only trust Google Translator since I don't speak German at all XD
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