pre-AWE (yes, seriously) drabble challenge response, drabbles 9 and 12

[elerrina_amanya]

So, I was posting some old stories on ff.net, and after the initial shock and horror that it's been over  three years since AWE came out, I realised that I never finished posting my drabble challenge fics.  And yes, I know this place is deserted and I've been over the three-years-too-late part, but for the sake of completeness, the rest of these

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[corrielle]

Oh, these are lovely... the Will/Liz piece unfolds really nicely, and I like the way that each one of the sections follows the same pattern. It makes the little but very significant variations stand out.

The Ana Maria one... broke my heart. I think the (really fantastic) line that did it was Never once had she expressed a desire to be laid out upon a blood-washed deck, graceful limbs become ungainly in death. That's just... wow. *sniffle*