Shay Leigh Turner

[potcsues]

I'm still mad at araeph for pointing me towards this. I could have lived a happy life without suffering through this...thing, thankyouverymuch.

TITLE: Pirates of the Caribbean two: Pirates Return
CULPRIT: Irish-Pride
SUMMARY: "18 years have passed, Will and Elizabeth have a daughter called Shay Leigh and Jack decides to return with news for Will, he has

Comments

[kestaa]

What is this mess!?! I couldn't read all of it. I see what you meant about the IQ thing. It hurts so much!

"Oh, really, what if I do this?" replied Tiernan cutting Twigg's sword arm off.
TWIGG: 'Tis but a scratch.
TIERNAN: A scratch? Your arm's off!
TWIGG: No, it isn't.
TIERNAN: Well, what's that then?
TWIGG: I've had worse. I'm still good, I .uh.let you take it so you.ah would have a bit of a chance. yes," replied Twigg who sounded uncertain

Yes, wrong movie. But it's better this way isn't it?

And I only skimmed it...

[phfa]

*twitch*

" In Which I Have No Idea What's Going On "
I am with you. I am so with you.

It's random lines stolen from movies, with three self-insert-type names, and...and...

And I stick with my original *twitch*

I feel better now.

[ganeris]

I almost never give negative reviews, but patting yourself on the back for not knowing grammar hit me where I live. I went, I flamed, I feel so much better now.

[caffeine_buzz]

Well, sure, who needs that silly grammar stuff anyway? I'm much more interested in the storyline -- because at the moment it fried my brain too much to even think about the way she abused poor, innocent grammar.

[farmercuerden]

Well... I didn't understand any of the plot, so...

But she killed Gibbs. She must die.