It's basically just spell-checking, checking for weird English (it's not my first language) and just general 'is it interesting enough' and 'is the order right' stuff. (The order of the scenes has been thrown around a lot and might not make sense at all anymore. :S ) I'm not on my own computer right now, plus I'm in the middle of exams, so I'm not sure when I'll have a chance to go online again. I'll try to e-mail the story to you some time this week, is that all right?
Hee. Back at my own comp a bit sooner than I thought. :D
Um. I couldn't find your e-mail address at your profile, so I uploaded the file. Which is probably more practical than sending it as an attachment, anyway. It's here. Now with added disclaimer for people accidentally finding it, haha. (My e-mail is nanashi202[AT]yahoo[DOT]co[DOT]uk.)
*face palm* Every time I read it I like it less. Anyway, my comments are at the start and throughout the story, between brackets.
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It's basically just spell-checking, checking for weird English (it's not my first language) and just general 'is it interesting enough' and 'is the order right' stuff. (The order of the scenes has been thrown around a lot and might not make sense at all anymore. :S ) I'm not on my own computer right now, plus I'm in the middle of exams, so I'm not sure when I'll have a chance to go online again. I'll try to e-mail the story to you some time this week, is that all right?
Thanks again! :D
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Um. I couldn't find your e-mail address at your profile, so I uploaded the file. Which is probably more practical than sending it as an attachment, anyway. It's here. Now with added disclaimer for people accidentally finding it, haha. (My e-mail is nanashi202[AT]yahoo[DOT]co[DOT]uk.)
*face palm* Every time I read it I like it less. Anyway, my comments are at the start and throughout the story, between brackets.
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